第五篇,英语小日记看看哪里有错
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第五篇,英语小日记看看哪里有错
When I opened the window this morning .It was snowing ! Our city has not snowing for a long time.
In these days it was always overcast .In fect.I think the city in the snow is more beautiful than ever.I love snow. I piled up a snowman on the ground .but unluckly.I got a cold.
I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried
about my health. in fact, it did not matter.
When I opened the window this morning .It was snowing ! Our city has not snowing for a long time.
In these days it was always overcast .In fect.I think the city in the snow is more beautiful than ever.I love snow. I piled up a snowman on the ground .but unluckly.I got a cold.
I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried
about my health. in fact, it did not matter.
When I opened the window this morning .It was snowing !Our city (had) not (been) snowing for a long time.
In these days it was always overcast .In (fact).I think the city in the snow is more beautiful than (usual).I love snow.I piled up a snowman on the ground .but unluckily.I got a cold (and) felt uncomfortable because of the cold weather.I was tired,sleepy and had no strength.My parents (were worrying) about my health.(But) in fact,it did not matter.
In these days it was always overcast .In (fact).I think the city in the snow is more beautiful than (usual).I love snow.I piled up a snowman on the ground .but unluckily.I got a cold (and) felt uncomfortable because of the cold weather.I was tired,sleepy and had no strength.My parents (were worrying) about my health.(But) in fact,it did not matter.