大师作文网英语高手帮我修改一篇小作文
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英语高手帮我修改一篇小作文
An encounter of my friend
Recently,my friend bought a new bike which is very expensive and attractive.He loves it very much.Brought it only a few days later,one day,he rode it with his friend to an internet bar.Half an hour later,out of there,he suddenly found that his new bike was stolen.Getting so upset and angry,he and his friend decided to try finding it back.
His friend carried him with his bike 搜寻 in that area,抱着一丝希望,hoping that the thief has not go too far.By chance,they found a man who was riding a bike the same as his lost one.Because of he has made a sign on his bike before,he could recognize the bike at first sight.“Please stop,sir!” he shouted.however,quite reverse,the riding man speed up at once.at that moment,the two 嫉恶如仇的boys could conclude that he 就是 the thief.So his friend rode his bike to catch the thief while he was running after them.Due to not knowing that terrain so much,the thief soon rode into an impassable lane.The two boys rushed towards him immediately.Then three men were scuffling together with boys’ yelling “catch the thief”.Soon after,crowds surrounded them and some of them called for 110.the police arrived before long,made clear about the situation,they arrested the thief and gave back the bike to 失主.
A few days later,my friend heard of the thief was sentenced to two years因为偷车的罪名.
That is quite an unexpected but very lucky encounter of for my friend.Not everybody’s stolen thing can be found back again.………………然后怎么写
有追分哦
如果实在没法看重新按我的意思写一篇也行
An encounter of my friend
Recently,my friend bought a new bike which is very expensive and attractive.He loves it very much.Brought it only a few days later,one day,he rode it with his friend to an internet bar.Half an hour later,out of there,he suddenly found that his new bike was stolen.Getting so upset and angry,he and his friend decided to try finding it back.
His friend carried him with his bike 搜寻 in that area,抱着一丝希望,hoping that the thief has not go too far.By chance,they found a man who was riding a bike the same as his lost one.Because of he has made a sign on his bike before,he could recognize the bike at first sight.“Please stop,sir!” he shouted.however,quite reverse,the riding man speed up at once.at that moment,the two 嫉恶如仇的boys could conclude that he 就是 the thief.So his friend rode his bike to catch the thief while he was running after them.Due to not knowing that terrain so much,the thief soon rode into an impassable lane.The two boys rushed towards him immediately.Then three men were scuffling together with boys’ yelling “catch the thief”.Soon after,crowds surrounded them and some of them called for 110.the police arrived before long,made clear about the situation,they arrested the thief and gave back the bike to 失主.
A few days later,my friend heard of the thief was sentenced to two years因为偷车的罪名.
That is quite an unexpected but very lucky encounter of for my friend.Not everybody’s stolen thing can be found back again.………………然后怎么写
有追分哦
如果实在没法看重新按我的意思写一篇也行
里面语法的小毛病比较多.另外感觉是很生硬的汉语翻译过来.
楼主这篇文章是练习还是正式需要的?如果比较重要,你给我发消息,我过几个小时之后回来可以帮你认真修改.
楼主这篇文章是练习还是正式需要的?如果比较重要,你给我发消息,我过几个小时之后回来可以帮你认真修改.