大师作文网急 急 麻烦帮我改下英语作文
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急 急 麻烦帮我改下英语作文
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A memorable event in my life
There are many memorable in my life,but only one thing give me deeply memorable.As a child,I was so naughty that I often got into trouble.The thing had happened when I was six-year- old.One day,I went to my grandpas’ home,but there were no adults in home,only my two brothers,we were as natural as to play together.It was a very hot summer,so we began to play water that made ourselves to be getting nice and cool.We climbed up the windowsill; the windowsill was too small to us,sullenly I felled down the windowsill.We were all stupefied.At that time,I felled a hugely painfully come from my right arm.I know my arm was fracture,so I began to crying.My brothers calling my parents while comforting me.I was very afraid,they had given me very great courage.They didn’t leave me until my father came back.They took me to the No.4 people’s hospital.Though it has passed for 16 years,I’ll forever remember it.
要给我们的外教的!
A memorable event in my life
There are many memorable in my life,but only one thing give me deeply memorable.As a child,I was so naughty that I often got into trouble.The thing had happened when I was six-year- old.One day,I went to my grandpas’ home,but there were no adults in home,only my two brothers,we were as natural as to play together.It was a very hot summer,so we began to play water that made ourselves to be getting nice and cool.We climbed up the windowsill; the windowsill was too small to us,sullenly I felled down the windowsill.We were all stupefied.At that time,I felled a hugely painfully come from my right arm.I know my arm was fracture,so I began to crying.My brothers calling my parents while comforting me.I was very afraid,they had given me very great courage.They didn’t leave me until my father came back.They took me to the No.4 people’s hospital.Though it has passed for 16 years,I’ll forever remember it.
天呐 是我英语差还是什么啊 怎么感觉好多语法错误啊
A memorable event in my life
There are many memorable events in my life,but only one thing give me deep memory.As a child,I was so naughty that I often got into trouble.The thing happened when I was six-year- old.One day,I went to my grandpas’ home,but there was no adults at home,only my two brothers,we were as naturaly as to play together.It was a very hot summer,so we began to play with water to let ourselves be feeling nice and cool.We climbed up the windowsill; the windowsill was too small to us,sulldenly I felled down the windowsill.We were all stupefied.At that time,I felled a hugely painfully comeing from my right arm.I know my arm was fracture,so I began to cry.My brothers called my parents while comforting me.I was very afraid,they had given me very great courage.They didn’t leave me until my father came back.They took me to the No.4 people’s hospital.Though it has passed 16 years,I’ll remember it forever.不知道对不对啊
A memorable event in my life
There are many memorable events in my life,but only one thing give me deep memory.As a child,I was so naughty that I often got into trouble.The thing happened when I was six-year- old.One day,I went to my grandpas’ home,but there was no adults at home,only my two brothers,we were as naturaly as to play together.It was a very hot summer,so we began to play with water to let ourselves be feeling nice and cool.We climbed up the windowsill; the windowsill was too small to us,sulldenly I felled down the windowsill.We were all stupefied.At that time,I felled a hugely painfully comeing from my right arm.I know my arm was fracture,so I began to cry.My brothers called my parents while comforting me.I was very afraid,they had given me very great courage.They didn’t leave me until my father came back.They took me to the No.4 people’s hospital.Though it has passed 16 years,I’ll remember it forever.不知道对不对啊