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英文改错!速求.Last symmer I take a part-time job in the Internatio

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英文改错!速求.
Last symmer I take a part-time job in the International
Camp for children .I have been told one more worker
will be needed this year and I think you are fit it .How
about join us The camp is at the foot of a small hill
close to a river .It is so a beautiful place!We can hear
birds singing happy all around .Everybody sleeps in tents,
that is very interesting.We usually work only five
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit
the area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable
experience.If you have interests in it ,reply to me soon.
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英文改错!速求.Last symmer I take a part-time job in the Internatio
我是高中英语老师,改了一下.
Last symmer I take(took) a part-time job in the International
Camp for children .I have been told one more worker
will be needed this year and I think you are(去掉) fit it .How
about join(joining) us The camp is at the foot of a small hill
close to a river .It is so(such) a beautiful place!We can hear
birds singing happy(happily) all around .Everybody sleeps in tents,
that(which) is very interesting.We usually work only five
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time (to)visit
the area and have a(去掉a) fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable
experience.If you have interests(去掉s) in it ,reply to me soon.