大师作文网一篇英语短文改错、求助
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：大师作文网作业帮 分类：英语作业 时间：2024/11/10 19:18:29
一篇英语短文改错、求助
据老师说有10处错误.求高人指出.A 92-year-old woman in village,fujian province,has been drunk more than 500 grams of alcohol every day for decade,Eren now the old woman is still in such good health that she remains total clear-minded,and even works in outside occasionally after drinking,Her randson,Who is in her 50s,said he saw her drink liguor when he is only a little boy,However,she drinks fewer now under the suggestion from her children and grandchildren and,as a result,she tarns to soft drinks but drinks more than a kilogram of it a day ,grape sugar water is her favorite for the monent.
据老师说有10处错误.求高人指出.A 92-year-old woman in village,fujian province,has been drunk more than 500 grams of alcohol every day for decade,Eren now the old woman is still in such good health that she remains total clear-minded,and even works in outside occasionally after drinking,Her randson,Who is in her 50s,said he saw her drink liguor when he is only a little boy,However,she drinks fewer now under the suggestion from her children and grandchildren and,as a result,she tarns to soft drinks but drinks more than a kilogram of it a day ,grape sugar water is her favorite for the monent.
A 92-year-old woman in (加a) village,fujian province, has been( 去掉） drunk more than 500 grams of alcohol every day for (加a) decade,Eren now the old woman is still in such (加a) good health that she remains total(totally) clear-minded,and even works in(去掉） outside occasionally after drinking,Her randson, Who is in her（his) 50s, said he saw her drink liguor when he is(was) only a little boy, However, she drinks fewer(less) now under the suggestion from her children and grandchildren and,as a result, she tarns to soft drinks but drinks more than a kilogram of it a day ,grape sugar water is her favorite for(at) the monent.