英语作文,大师们帮忙写下哈,26号就要交了,题目是Hou to make the Earth a better plac

英语作文,大师们帮忙写下哈,26号就要交了,题目是Hou to make the Earth a better place to live?
要求：1.字数100字以上
2.分3段：第一段要求开门见山,不许煽情;第二段陈述主要意见,该段要有topic sentence;第三段是总结,总结不能机械重复第一段的意思,而要从另外的方式来表述第一段的意思.
谢谢哈.
也翻译下中文哈，谢谢

How to make the earth a better place to live
With the development of our industry,the environment become more and more bad.Given the earth is the only place which is suitable for our humans to live so far,we should not just focus attention on the progress of industry without thinking the bad effect on environment.It's the time we should take measures to make the earth a better place to live,my points can be listed as follows.
The first and foremost,we should move the heavy polluting enterprise far away form centray city
that can protect the people from pollution.Because the exhaust gas and sewage can do harm
to our healthy.Secondly,we should devote ourselves to studying how to Improve industrial production process,especially the factories with high energy consumption levels.The last but not the least,we must foster the environmental protection consciousness.Only in this way,our environment problems could be solved in essence.
All in all ,making the earth a better place to live is a persistent project,It need many generations to do that.But no matter how difficult it is,we ought to keep fighting,for that's our hope to achieve our dream.
能力有限,写得不咋样,你参考一下.写完我发现我第二段的观点局限于环境保护问题,你可以把环境换掉!
再问： 中文能翻译下吗？呵呵
再答： 如何将地球变得更适宜人类居住 随着工业的发展，环境变得越来越差，考虑到地球是目前唯一能居住的地方，我们不应该一味地注重工业的发展而不去考虑工业给环境带来坏的影响。是时候采取措施将地球变得更美好了，我的观点可以列为一下几点： 首先，我们要将污染严重的企业搬离中心城市，因为废弃和污水会对我们的健康造成不好的影响。第二，我们要致力于改善工业生产工艺，尤其是哪些高耗能的企业。最后一点，我们要培养人们的环保意识，只有这样，我们的环境问题才能得到根本性的解决。 总之，改善地球更适宜人类生存是一个长久的工程，它需要几代人的共同努力，但是不管有多难，我们也会坚持奋斗，因为那是我们实现梦想的希望。
再问： 嗯 谢谢哈