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请帮检查一句汉译英的问题
原句：我国已明确将“进一步推进政府会计改革,逐步建立政府财务报告制度”写入国家“十二五”规划.
译句：Our country has clearly put "further advance of the governmental accounting reform" and "gradual establishment of the government financial reporting system" into the Twelfth Five-Year Plan for National Economic and Social Development.
请问这个翻译对吗?有哪些地方需要做修正?
原句：我国已明确将“进一步推进政府会计改革,逐步建立政府财务报告制度”写入国家“十二五”规划.
译句：Our country has clearly put "further advance of the governmental accounting reform" and "gradual establishment of the government financial reporting system" into the Twelfth Five-Year Plan for National Economic and Social Development.
请问这个翻译对吗?有哪些地方需要做修正?
引号内的句子“进一步推进政府会计改革,逐步建立政府财务报告制度”是包含动词的,建议翻译时也翻译成动作“To further promote the reform of government accounting, and gradually establish a government financial reporting system”.
再问： 那这样这里的gradually前面是不是也应该加上to呢？
再答： 对，不好意思，我疏忽了。
再问： 那这样这里的gradually前面是不是也应该加上to呢？
再答： 对，不好意思，我疏忽了。