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I will help you choice a good city to live. There are two city can be choice. A city has a good environment and mang enterlairment but it has less employment . But B city has many employments. If you want to live in a comfortable city I suggest you choice A city . If you want to have more choice of work,I suggest you choice B city . In my opinion, it is a important to have a comfortable environment to live . It can make us more heath. And I think enterlairment is importance too. we can reduce our stress by them . So I think A city is more better than B city 作文题目和要求在附件里
作文修改 急
解题思路: 要用正确动词,形容词和冠词 ,注意英语中各种词类的应用,还要注意名词的单复数
解题过程:
I will help you choice 改为动词choose a good city to live. There are two city can be choice.改为two cities to choose. A city has a good environment and mang enterlairment 改为entertainments but it has less employment . But B city has many 改为 more employment. If you want to live in a comfortable city I suggest you choice 改为动词choose A city . If you want to have more choice 改为choices of work,I suggest you choice 改为动词choose B city . In my opinion, it is a important to have a comfortable environment to live . It can make us more heath 改为healthy. And I think加the enterlairment 改为entertainment is importance too. we can reduce our stress by them . So I think A city is more better than B city
最终答案:略