有哪些错误i has a aunt.her name is lily .she is thirty years old.

有哪些错误i has a aunt.her name is lily .she is thirty years old. Her name is Lingling a___ she is thirteen years old Today is my aunt's _____ birthday.So she is thirty years old Today is my aunt's( )birthday.So she is thirty years old/now Lily has a good friend,Her name is Wang Ran.She is from Chin I (suppose) she is not yet thirty years old. 有没有一些错误my name is ***,I'm 15 years old.I'm a lively Chinese i;m peter l have a friend her name is Alice she is ten years i know her a____.she is 13 years old uncle is thirty years old. she has a s____ Her name is Amy Lily is a girl.She is 13 years old.合并成一句 Help!