自己写了一篇书信体小作文,请老师点评下.

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自己写了一篇书信体小作文,请老师点评下.
Dear Darcy,
Long time no see!Thank you for you latest letter.As to you hope me introduce a wonderful film to you.I am glad to recommend my favorite film -"Inception" .
Why would I recommend this movie.because I think it a good movie.The reason may be manifold,but,the following are revelant I thought of.
Firstly,"Inteception",is a 2010 science fiction action heist film,in addition,writtern,co-produced,and directed by Christopher Nolan,Who is acomplete famous director.Secondly,the film tell a miraculous world where some people could go into others dream and heist their informantion which is impossible for the real human being world.Finally,Darcy,the film's structure is very complex that you may cost few time to understand ,and the whole movie is full of soul-strring conversation.I srongly recommend you to see this movie.
Sincerely yours,
Leo
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cost much time to understand
and the whole movie is full of soul-strring conversations

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