大师作文网谁帮我看看下面这段文字有没有语法错误?帮我纠正一下,修改得更通顺一些.
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谁帮我看看下面这段文字有没有语法错误?帮我纠正一下,修改得更通顺一些.
dear teacher:
I am very glad to talk with you,I have a question to ask,in spite of the question may be improper,So,you have the right to refuse to answer,As we all know,we are in China,a traditional country,Feudalism had existed in China for around two 2000 years,Thus chinese people may be quiet diffrent to you,It is obvious that you are a Christian and you have read the Bible,Leviticus 18 22 says ,if a man lies with another man ,it is an abomination,Is homosexuality a sin?I want to know your attitudes towards homosexuality.
dear teacher:
I am very glad to talk with you,I have a question to ask,in spite of the question may be improper,So,you have the right to refuse to answer,As we all know,we are in China,a traditional country,Feudalism had existed in China for around two 2000 years,Thus chinese people may be quiet diffrent to you,It is obvious that you are a Christian and you have read the Bible,Leviticus 18 22 says ,if a man lies with another man ,it is an abomination,Is homosexuality a sin?I want to know your attitudes towards homosexuality.
这段话有些表达是有问题的哦!
Dear teacher,
I am writing to ask you a question.Please do me a favor!If you are offended by my
question,please forgive me and make no comment!
As we know,Feudalism rooted in China for around 2000 years and had a great
influence on Chinese,so compared with Christians,Chinese are conservative,
especially when it comes to homosexuality.Similarly,just as the Bible,Leviticus 18 22 reads,"If a man lies with another man,it is an abomination." So I am just wandering whether
homosexuality is a sin.
Please let me know your opinion about homosexuality.
Dear teacher,
I am writing to ask you a question.Please do me a favor!If you are offended by my
question,please forgive me and make no comment!
As we know,Feudalism rooted in China for around 2000 years and had a great
influence on Chinese,so compared with Christians,Chinese are conservative,
especially when it comes to homosexuality.Similarly,just as the Bible,Leviticus 18 22 reads,"If a man lies with another man,it is an abomination." So I am just wandering whether
homosexuality is a sin.
Please let me know your opinion about homosexuality.