大师作文网帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等
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帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等
一（I was born in Tianjin.It’s in the north of China.There are nine rivers through the city.The most famous river is Haihe.It’s a beautiful river.You can take a boat along the river and see the beautiful view.People in Tianjin are very friendly and kind.Tianjin is famous for Food Street.You can taste lots of delicious food in the Food Street .Gu Wen Hua Jie is also famous.you can buy a lot of things in this street.Welcome to Tianjin.There is a lot of interesting places to visit.）
二（Thank you for you letter.Now I’d like to tell you something about mid-autumn day.It’s on the 15th august.Every year when the holiday comes.We will have one day off.We will eat moon cake.It’s a very delicious food.We also gou out for a walk to see the round moon in the evening.Many family will get together and have a big meal.We will enjoy ourselves in that day.It’s a interesting holiday.）
三 还有这篇（I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up to it first.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.I also want to visit Bei Hai park.If the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.
I will stay there for two days.I think it would be a wonderful holiday.）
一（I was born in Tianjin.It’s in the north of China.There are nine rivers through the city.The most famous river is Haihe.It’s a beautiful river.You can take a boat along the river and see the beautiful view.People in Tianjin are very friendly and kind.Tianjin is famous for Food Street.You can taste lots of delicious food in the Food Street .Gu Wen Hua Jie is also famous.you can buy a lot of things in this street.Welcome to Tianjin.There is a lot of interesting places to visit.）
二（Thank you for you letter.Now I’d like to tell you something about mid-autumn day.It’s on the 15th august.Every year when the holiday comes.We will have one day off.We will eat moon cake.It’s a very delicious food.We also gou out for a walk to see the round moon in the evening.Many family will get together and have a big meal.We will enjoy ourselves in that day.It’s a interesting holiday.）
三 还有这篇（I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up to it first.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.I also want to visit Bei Hai park.If the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.
I will stay there for two days.I think it would be a wonderful holiday.）
You can take a boat along the river--take boat along
You can taste lots of delicious food --you can enjoy更好
There is a lot of interesting places to visit--there are
mid-autumn day...Mid-autumn Festival
on the 15th august.应该是on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month
It’s a very delicious food.--It’s very delicious.
gou out --go out
in that day.--on that day
a interesting holiday--an interesting holiday
You can taste lots of delicious food --you can enjoy更好
There is a lot of interesting places to visit--there are
mid-autumn day...Mid-autumn Festival
on the 15th august.应该是on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month
It’s a very delicious food.--It’s very delicious.
gou out --go out
in that day.--on that day
a interesting holiday--an interesting holiday