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修改病句,并说明病因He was "listening"(A) "attentively"(B) in class,hi

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修改病句,并说明病因
He was "listening"(A) "attentively"(B) in class,his eyes "were fixed"(C) on the blackboard.
请仔细回答,(引号内的内容为A B C选项内容.)
修改病句,并说明病因He was
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正确答案是:去掉 were 或者在 his eyes 前加and.

【解析】:
He was  listening attentively  in class,his eyes fixed on the blackboard.
He was  listening attentively  in class,and his eyes were fixed on the blackboard.
   上课时,他认真听讲,眼睛凝视着黑板.
病句错就错在:
1、两个简单句必须用and 连接,改法为2.

2、如果要是独立主格做伴随状语,去掉 were,his eyes 是 fixed on the blackboard 的逻辑主语,改法为1.

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