Dear leaders:

Dear leaders:
Hello!Thank you very much for taking the time to browse the application letter of the "ordinary people" .
She comes from shijiazhuang,hebei province and is about to graduate from Hebei Normal University of Science & Technology,and hopes to work in shijiazhuang.
In the freshman year,she decided her later work goal:to be an accountant.And she worked hard for this goal for three years.
She knows that it is important for the company and herself to love her job,and only by keeping high enthusiasm in work can take work as a pleasure,and as a result she can finish her task more efficiently.
Although she didn't get the scholarship in school,she has enough ability to cope with the challenges,and the most important thing is that she pays great attention to this work,and has confidence to do this work well.Enterprise is the place where talented people are hired,rather than somebody who has a diploma only,so an excellent enterprise leader can make a prompt decision and not to stick to one pattern to hire an "ordinary people".Of course,these "ordinary people" are not really normal.
If,you can give the opportunity,then the candidate is very lucky,because she really meets a good leader.And she will turn the grateful mood into working energy,and harvest with her own hands to pay back to the company.

To whom it may concern,
Hello!Thank you very much for taking time to browse this application letter.
She is about to graduate from Hebei Normal University of Science & Technology,and hopes to work in shijiazhuang,hebei province,of where she comes from.
She has planned her career goal,to be an accountant,when she was a freshman.In order to achieve this,she urged herself to work hard for the next 3 years.
"To love what you are doing" is something she always remember as an employee.It is also clear to her that only by keeping high enthusiasm can take her work as a pleasure,and as a result suprisingly-high efficiency may occur.
She is fully qualified to deal with challenges,and the most important thing is that she pays great attention to her job,and has confidence to do it well.Instead of hiring somebody who has a diploma only,companies are acutually hunting for talented employees.A wise HR team can make a all-aspect-considered decision instead of sticking to some set criteria to hire an "ordinary people".
She will be honered if you would give her an opportunity to be a member of your company.In return,you will see her harvest with her own hands to pay back to the company,with energy and a greatful heart.
已大致修改.
同时个人建议如果是求职信,把所有的she,改回I第一人称,因为求职信是以自己身份呈给HR,或者公司的.