英语翻译基督教对人类社会的深远影响实际上大大超出了人们的所知和想象.基督教极大地影响了艺术、建筑、思想与文化,除了哥特式

英语翻译
基督教对人类社会的深远影响实际上大大超出了人们的所知和想象.基督教极大地影响了艺术、建筑、思想与文化,除了哥特式教堂建筑和拜占庭教堂建筑外,文艺复兴的建筑和艺术也是在基督教影响下形成的.达·芬奇、米开朗基罗、拉菲尔、伦勃朗、丢勒等著名艺术家的作品无不如此.基督教影响音乐,例如交响乐就是从圣乐中发展而来的,许多著名音乐家如巴赫、亨德尔、门德尔松、海顿、舒伯特、莫扎特、贝多芬等的音乐作品都深受基督精神的影响.音乐之父”海顿在创作《创世纪》时,每天都要跪下来向上帝祈祷,祈求上帝赐予他工作的力量.基督教影响了许多文学和思想作品,如《神曲》、《愚人颂》、《新教伦理与资本主义精神》、《乌托邦》、《失乐园》、《国富论》、《浮士德》等.基督教对日常生活,如节假日、纪元、日常用语等也有多方面的影响.

首先,第二句话的停顿有问题,我不知道你是怎么停顿的(我个人默认是把第一个逗号改为句号),逗号你该放在哪儿再看看再改改.
翻译如下：

The far-reaching effect on the human society of Christianity is far beyond people's knowledge and imagination. Christianity greatly influenced art, architecture, thought and culture. In addition to the Gothic and Byzantine church architecture and Byzantine, the architecture and art in renaissance is also formed under the influence of Christianity. Leonardo da Vinci, Michelangelo, Raphael, Rembrandt, Dürer and other famous artists' works are all the same. Christian made influence on music, for example, the symphony evolved from the sacred music. The music compositions of many famous musicians such as Bach, Handel, Mendelssohn, Haydn, Schubert, Mozart, Beethoven and so on was all deeply influenced by the spirit of Christ. When composing "Genesis" , the dather of Music, Haydn kneeled down to pray to God everyday , askng for the power of working. Christianity made effect on many works of literature and thought such as "Divine Comedy," "Praise of Folly", "The Protestant Ethic and the Spirit of Capitalism", "Utopia", "Paradise Lost", "The Wealth of Nations," "Faust",etc. Christianity made many effects on the daily life such as Holidays, era, everyday language,ect.



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