大师作文网请大家帮我看看这篇英语作文能有多少分?
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请大家帮我看看这篇英语作文能有多少分?
My Winter Holiday
On my Winter Holiday,did you know what i do First,i help my mom did some chores,like did the laundry,took out the trash ,swept the floor...Second,we family went to the aquarium,i saw some interesting seals,octopus,and sea lion.Then,we went to the Animal World ,there are very interesting .I like there.I favorite animal is panda ,because it's very cute.So,on my Winter Holiday,i feel very happy.
请帮我指出错处，并加以改正，
Thanks very much!
My Winter Holiday
On my Winter Holiday,did you know what i do First,i help my mom did some chores,like did the laundry,took out the trash ,swept the floor...Second,we family went to the aquarium,i saw some interesting seals,octopus,and sea lion.Then,we went to the Animal World ,there are very interesting .I like there.I favorite animal is panda ,because it's very cute.So,on my Winter Holiday,i feel very happy.
请帮我指出错处，并加以改正，
Thanks very much!
My Winter Holiday
On my Winter Holiday,did (改成do) you know what i do(改成I did 或I have done) 你是否知道是现在时,我做的事情是过去发生的,用过去时或现在完成时
First,i help my mom did (改成do,help+动词原形) some chores,like did（改成doing,like+sth,比如…) the laundry,took(taking) out the trash ,swept(sweeping） the floor...
Second,we（改成our,我们的,物主代词,we我们,不能直接接名词） family went to the aquarium,I saw some interesting seals,octopus,and sea lion.
Then,we went to the Animal World ,there are （it is,那里很有趣,there are指有…,不表示那里怎么样） very interesting.I like there （可加very much）.
I （My）favorite animal is panda,because it's very cute.
So(In a word 总之,so 是连词不能单独在句首加逗号使用)on my Winter Holiday,I feel very happy.
On my Winter Holiday,did (改成do) you know what i do(改成I did 或I have done) 你是否知道是现在时,我做的事情是过去发生的,用过去时或现在完成时
First,i help my mom did (改成do,help+动词原形) some chores,like did（改成doing,like+sth,比如…) the laundry,took(taking) out the trash ,swept(sweeping） the floor...
Second,we（改成our,我们的,物主代词,we我们,不能直接接名词） family went to the aquarium,I saw some interesting seals,octopus,and sea lion.
Then,we went to the Animal World ,there are （it is,那里很有趣,there are指有…,不表示那里怎么样） very interesting.I like there （可加very much）.
I （My）favorite animal is panda,because it's very cute.
So(In a word 总之,so 是连词不能单独在句首加逗号使用)on my Winter Holiday,I feel very happy.