大师作文网求英语老师帮我看看作文哪里有错误❓
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求英语老师帮我看看作文哪里有错误❓
Everyone all(all去掉) have（has,everyone后面跟动词单数） favourite things,such as food,colours,sports and so on.Today I will tell you my favourite sport.My favourite sport is table tennis.It gets(get改成become,由于是过去式,所以改为became) my favourite sport when I was 6 years old.
Table tennis is very popular in China.Many people often play table tennis in the free time so that (加上they can,这里不可以省略主语)keep health.Table tennis is a exciting and relaxing sport.Learn(改为Learning,动词做主语得用ing形式) it is very easy and it is much safer than other sports.
Sometimes I play table tennis with my classmates in the school stadium.I want to play table tennis in the Olympic games one day.
I will be hard for my dream(这句话你是想说想实现我的梦想比较难,可以改为It will be hard for me to realise my dream) and(改为but更合适语境) I wish our dream（dreams） can come true.
再问： 我最后一段第一句是想说：我会努力实现我的梦想，你理解错了
再答： 我会努力实现我的梦想(I will try every effort to realise my dream)
再问： 那要是满分十五分的话，能得多少？
再答： 差不多10分吧
再问： 哦去，谢谢
Table tennis is very popular in China.Many people often play table tennis in the free time so that (加上they can,这里不可以省略主语)keep health.Table tennis is a exciting and relaxing sport.Learn(改为Learning,动词做主语得用ing形式) it is very easy and it is much safer than other sports.
Sometimes I play table tennis with my classmates in the school stadium.I want to play table tennis in the Olympic games one day.
I will be hard for my dream(这句话你是想说想实现我的梦想比较难,可以改为It will be hard for me to realise my dream) and(改为but更合适语境) I wish our dream（dreams） can come true.
再问： 我最后一段第一句是想说：我会努力实现我的梦想，你理解错了
再答： 我会努力实现我的梦想(I will try every effort to realise my dream)
再问： 那要是满分十五分的话，能得多少？
再答： 差不多10分吧
再问： 哦去，谢谢