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将这篇作文分为三部分（开头提出观点，中间为自己的意见，结尾发表看法），并且将这篇作文的观点明确（students should wear school uniforms），将这篇作文改成（删减或添加）高分作文，谢谢老师！ school uniforms Wearing school uniforms has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion,on the onehand ,Wearing school uniforms can make students feel proud of their schools. One the other hand, it builds a common spirit of unity among students. Furthermore, it reminds students of the value and history of their school. However, some students dislike them because the uniforms have simple colors, boring designs and bad quality.they think the uniform are out of style and ugly,if they wear the uniforms ,they don’t look smart any more .So I think that people should improve the quality of the school uniforms.we should be allowed the students to design their own uniforms,that would make students feel like wearing uniforms,and it would make them feel more comfortable and that's good for studying.

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students should wear school uniforms
I think students should wear school uniforms because uniforms can make things more equal (平等)for all students.
First, uniforms make students equal on an economic(经济的) level. With uniforms, students from poor families dress the same as students from rich families. It can encourage students to form friendships based on personality, not clothes. It also make the students not concentrate on the clothes any more ,In stead ,they could concentrate more on their studies .
Second, Wearing school uniforms can make students feel proud of their schools. It also builds a common spirit of unity（整体） among students. And it reminds students of the value（价值） and history of their school.
It is my opinion that all schools should wear school uniforms ,because it is good for their studies and growing .
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