英语翻译with the growth of the age,with the increase of experien

英语翻译
with the growth of the age,with the increase of experience.i gradually find
daily life is become boring,dull annd lack of enjoyment.in order to change the situation and improve the quality of the life ,i think that tourism is the best choice for me.generally speaking,tourism have a lot of benefits ,it is not only can relax mind and body ,but also can broaden the horizon,increase the knowledge.besides ,tourism have other important meaning and valuable for me ,i don't merely satisfy the Surface enjoyment ,what i pursue is that the feast for spirits ,
the release of soul and obtain the real freedom .in the process of tourism ,beatiful sceneries will make me cheerful,fresh air will make me entirely free from worry,sea will make broadens the mind ,i can forget the whole unhappy thing ,try my best to relieve me ,enjoy the natural beauty .where i go ,i will social customs and habits ,Cultural beliefs .actually ,tourism is a special experience of life ,
it will let you comprehend the value of life ,meaning of freedom .more importantly,you can do what you like ,you can go where you like ,entirely relieve from the worldly shackles.at lastly,i will use a poem to the end ,
a person with a white soul in the journey,he will pusue the atman.

is become改为becomes吧,tourism have 中的have改为has.it is not only can 中 is 去掉,貌似not only 后面的句子还要倒装.satisfy the Surface enjoyment 中enjoyment前加of.
再问： 要是把is become改为is becoming 行吧