谁能帮我看看这段有没有什么语法错误或用词不当?英文简历

谁能帮我看看这段有没有什么语法错误或用词不当?英文简历
在初高中都担任班长,平时善于处理同学之间的矛盾,在同学之间有较高的威信.同时管理班级日常的事物,每件事情都会合理安排,班级的各项事宜都可以有序进行.善于主持和策划活动,创新活动内容.
大学期间担任过班级的生活委员和班级团支部宣传委员,具有较强的活动组织能力.组织参加班级的团日活动,开展班会娱乐活动.我自己参加学校组织的创业大赛,领导一个小团队得到第二名的好成绩.大学期间也是自学会计基础知识,取得了会计资格证.具有预算控制能力,处理班级日常开支,以及活动经费的管理.喜欢文字,做过设计活动策划书和文字总结工作.在学校期间我得过几次奖学金,并顺利通过了大学英语六级.
平时也喜欢研究新鲜事物.具有较强适应能力,学习能力.可以尽快熟悉胜任自己的工作.性格开朗喜欢交朋友,思维严谨,做事积极主动.学校里可以跟团队合作以及独立开展工作.处理问题具有灵活性.
I was served as a monitor in middle school and high school.During this time,I was good at dealing with the contradiction between the classmates,so I had a high prestige between them.At the same time,I needed to manage the day-to-day affair,then,I would arrange things so it could be going in good order.I was good at planning and hosting the activity,also,I would create the game.
In the college,I was served as member of the class of life and the member of propaganda,so I had the ability of organizing.The class cadre and I organized sports and cultural activities.I participated in the school of business competition,it was glad to lead a small team to get a Runner-up.In addition to the basic knowledge,I studied the Accounting by myself and achieved the qualification certificate of Accounting.I controlled the budget,when we organized an event,I would handle the daily expenses as well as the cost management.I liked the writing,during the event,I wrote the book of design plan.I liked to compose the work of a summary.I gained scholarship more than once,passed national college English test (CET) bank-6.
Leisure time I like study new things.I have the strong ability of adaptation and learning to complete the work.I have the cheerful character to make friends.During the work,I can be rigorous thinking and positive.I can be teamwork or working independently,so I solve problem flexibility.

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I served as a monitor in middle shchool and high school. During that period, I handled the troubles well in the classmates and gained high prestige among them. Supervising the daily duties to make it go smoothly and in good order was another job that I incharged. And I usally could apply my creativity in planning and hosting activities.
Two of my titles in college were Life Committee Member of the class, and Publicity members of the Communist Youth League in the class. The superiors were quite impressed by my organizing abilites.
I arranged and participated in the class meeting with entertaining activities in Activities Day of the Communist Youth League. I leaded a small team and won the second prize in the business simulation game hosted by the school. To gain more skills I studied accounting and got Certificate of Accounting Professional by self-taught. I controlled the budget perfectly, so as managing the class daily expense and campaign fund. Paper work was my interest, I have wrote some schemes and summaries. I have gained scholarship several times and pass Colleage English Test(CET) bank-6.
In my spare time, I like studying fangle. Abilities of adaptation and learning are also my strong suits. I am always up on the jobs and make myself qualified quickly. I am out going and willing to make new friends. With critical thinking, positive attitude and flexibilities, I did the jobs perfectly with teamwork and independently.