Today is my birthday.This morning,I taked a walk.Now gradual

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Today is my birthday.This morning,I taked a walk.Now gradually into the winter,the leaves on the
trees fall down and drifting profusely and disordly.Branch was empty,feel a kind of pure and fresh feeling.Later,I wrote my homework at home,to the afternoon on the small classes.In the evening,I had a big dinner with my family and I had a small party at home.We all very happy.这篇文章有语法错误吗,请一一指点,错的单词也请纠正一下,

很中文式的文章,时态方面有点乱.特别是,later,I wrote那句太中国式了,是病句.另外,第二句最后一句没有谓语.

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