大师作文网《The wind and the sun》英文版,帮我看看有没有语法错误(包括过去时)
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《The wind and the sun》英文版,帮我看看有没有语法错误(包括过去时)
The wind and the sun
The wind and the sun are fighting.They are fighting about who is stronger.The sun says,‘I can make people take off their jacket.I am stronger than you are.’ The wind says,‘No,I am stronger than you are.I can blow.I can make people take off their jacket,too.’ A man goes out for a walk.He asks a tree,‘How is the weather today?Is it hot outside?’ ‘No,it is cold.It is windy,’ the tree answers.The windy sees the man.The wind tries to blow the man’s jacket off.‘It is cold,’the man says.He puts on his jacket.Whenever the wind is blowing,the man is holding his jacket.The man goes out for a walk again.He asks the tree,‘How is it outside?Is it cold outside?’ ‘No,it is sunny .It is hot,’the tree answers.The sun sees a man.The sun shines strongly.‘Oh,it is sunny .It is hot today,’ the man says.He takes off his jacket.The sun says to the wind.‘Hahaha.I won!See?I am stronger than you are.’
The wind and the sun
The wind and the sun are fighting.They are fighting about who is stronger.The sun says,‘I can make people take off their jacket.I am stronger than you are.’ The wind says,‘No,I am stronger than you are.I can blow.I can make people take off their jacket,too.’ A man goes out for a walk.He asks a tree,‘How is the weather today?Is it hot outside?’ ‘No,it is cold.It is windy,’ the tree answers.The windy sees the man.The wind tries to blow the man’s jacket off.‘It is cold,’the man says.He puts on his jacket.Whenever the wind is blowing,the man is holding his jacket.The man goes out for a walk again.He asks the tree,‘How is it outside?Is it cold outside?’ ‘No,it is sunny .It is hot,’the tree answers.The sun sees a man.The sun shines strongly.‘Oh,it is sunny .It is hot today,’ the man says.He takes off his jacket.The sun says to the wind.‘Hahaha.I won!See?I am stronger than you are.’
I am stronger than you are 的are 去掉.
The windy sees the man.The wind tries to blow the man’s jacket off.可以合成一句,简洁明了The windy sees the man and tries to blow his jacket off.
‘How is it outside?Is it cold outside?’去掉后面那句的outside,写上去的话,显得重复罗嗦‘How is it outside?Is it cold?’
The sun sees a man and shines strongly.理由同上
The windy sees the man.The wind tries to blow the man’s jacket off.可以合成一句,简洁明了The windy sees the man and tries to blow his jacket off.
‘How is it outside?Is it cold outside?’去掉后面那句的outside,写上去的话,显得重复罗嗦‘How is it outside?Is it cold?’
The sun sees a man and shines strongly.理由同上