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帮我看一下这篇文章的语法对不对
My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The Movie.It is about a girl named Mileywho lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma’s birthday ,Mileywent back to her hometown—Tennessee.And shefound out that Hannah Montana brought a lot of trouble for her .But she didn’tgive up and worked out all the problems .I like this movie because it is agreat comedy .And it tells us :Be confidence in yourself .Don’t give up when thingsdon’t turn out the way you planned .The movie gives me a good lesson.
My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The Movie.It is about a girl named Mileywho lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma’s birthday ,Mileywent back to her hometown—Tennessee.And shefound out that Hannah Montana brought a lot of trouble for her .But she didn’tgive up and worked out all the problems .I like this movie because it is agreat comedy .And it tells us :Be confidence in yourself .Don’t give up when thingsdon’t turn out the way you planned .The movie gives me a good lesson.
My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The M（m）ovie.It (删.与it）is about a girl named Miley who lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop star named Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma’s birthday ,Miley went back to her hometown—Tennessee.And she found out that Hannah Montana brought a lot of trouble for her .But she didn’t give up and worked out all the problems .I like this movie because it is a great comedy .And it tells us :Be confidence（confident） in yourself .Don’t give up when things don’t turn out the way you planned .The movie gives(gave) me a good lesson.
楼主英语好好哦~如果是演讲稿的话木有问题.书面文章就需要再斟酌一下了,因为有些句子在语法上不成立.
加油!
再问： Hannah Montan：the movie就是这个电影的名字，最后一句一定要用gave吗，这个故事情节是过去式，谢谢
再答： 楼主肯定也知道英语很少用一般现在时态，它是表达一个持续做出影响的状态，例如永恒，或习惯性。 这里不是很合适。外国人说话习惯喜欢就事论事，时态非常明确。所以既然是已经给我上了一课 我认为还是过去式合适一些~厚厚 不知道楼主满意不~
楼主英语好好哦~如果是演讲稿的话木有问题.书面文章就需要再斟酌一下了,因为有些句子在语法上不成立.
加油!
再问： Hannah Montan：the movie就是这个电影的名字，最后一句一定要用gave吗，这个故事情节是过去式，谢谢
再答： 楼主肯定也知道英语很少用一般现在时态，它是表达一个持续做出影响的状态，例如永恒，或习惯性。 这里不是很合适。外国人说话习惯喜欢就事论事，时态非常明确。所以既然是已经给我上了一课 我认为还是过去式合适一些~厚厚 不知道楼主满意不~