大师作文网求修改英语作文,主要帮我修改下语法错误还有 流畅度,感激不尽
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求修改英语作文,主要帮我修改下语法错误还有 流畅度,感激不尽
I read a book calls in this holiday .It was writed by Daniel·Defoe.Daniel·Defoe was born in 1660 at London.He is a british writer.He is known as the "father of European fiction".
This book is very interesting .It's a story about Robinson.He liked adventure and he had been to a lot of places around the world.In 1659,Robinson traveled to South America by boat.but he met a storm ,and he was lost in a island.He lived in the island alone for 28 years .at last,he back to England .
What strike me most is 'Channel Friday' ,because this is a very diffcult step.Friady is a
wlid man ,he eats human flesh.Robinson told him that don't eat human flesh anymore or he would kill him .So ,Friday eat mutton instead of human flesh.
I read a book calls in this holiday .It was writed by Daniel·Defoe.Daniel·Defoe was born in 1660 at London.He is a british writer.He is known as the "father of European fiction".
This book is very interesting .It's a story about Robinson.He liked adventure and he had been to a lot of places around the world.In 1659,Robinson traveled to South America by boat.but he met a storm ,and he was lost in a island.He lived in the island alone for 28 years .at last,he back to England .
What strike me most is 'Channel Friday' ,because this is a very diffcult step.Friady is a
wlid man ,he eats human flesh.Robinson told him that don't eat human flesh anymore or he would kill him .So ,Friday eat mutton instead of human flesh.
有些情节写的不完善容易让人搞不懂或者对这本书没兴趣,所以我从记忆里找了一点这本书的情节,不知道对不对,然后最后加了一段总结以免感觉话没有说完.
I read a book titled Robinson Crusoe this holiday.This book was written by a famous British writer,also known as " the father of European fiction",Daniel Defore.Defore was born in 1660 in London.
This book is an interesting story about Robinson who liked adventure and had been to a lot of places around the world.In 1659,Robinson travelled to South America by ship.Unfortunately he met a storm and was lost at a island.Although scared,he managed to survive at the lonely island bravely.He also tried to find a way out,but he failed many times.So he had to live in the island alone for 28 years.But god will save those who try to save themselves.At last,he successfully sent the SOS signal and was rescued to England.
The chapter which impressed me most in this book is 'Channel Friday'.Friday is a savage that Robinson saved from a tribal fight between two savage tribes.It's quite difficult to train a savage who even ate human to a civilized man.But Robinson made it and made him eat mutton instead.
I have learned a lot in this book.Robinson is a man who is brave and clever.I should learn to be like him in real life.Then I won't be afraid when I' m faced with any difficulties,because nothing can be as hard as trying to survive at a lonly island.
I read a book titled Robinson Crusoe this holiday.This book was written by a famous British writer,also known as " the father of European fiction",Daniel Defore.Defore was born in 1660 in London.
This book is an interesting story about Robinson who liked adventure and had been to a lot of places around the world.In 1659,Robinson travelled to South America by ship.Unfortunately he met a storm and was lost at a island.Although scared,he managed to survive at the lonely island bravely.He also tried to find a way out,but he failed many times.So he had to live in the island alone for 28 years.But god will save those who try to save themselves.At last,he successfully sent the SOS signal and was rescued to England.
The chapter which impressed me most in this book is 'Channel Friday'.Friday is a savage that Robinson saved from a tribal fight between two savage tribes.It's quite difficult to train a savage who even ate human to a civilized man.But Robinson made it and made him eat mutton instead.
I have learned a lot in this book.Robinson is a man who is brave and clever.I should learn to be like him in real life.Then I won't be afraid when I' m faced with any difficulties,because nothing can be as hard as trying to survive at a lonly island.