求帮忙修改文章中的语法,措辞或者各种错误,文章是一篇英语专业实习报告,求快准狠~定重谢

求帮忙修改文章中的语法,措辞或者各种错误,文章是一篇英语专业实习报告,求快准狠~定重谢
I.Purposes
The main purpose of professional internship is to consolidate thetheory; acquire practical professional knowledge to develop a preliminarypractical work and professional skills,to enable the graduates to better meetthe needs of society.In detail,the purposes of internship could be listed asfollow:
1.As a junior,I’m applying for masscommunication study of foreigngraduate,the internship in a newspaper office allows me to understand thecurrent situation and what quality is required to take a bold step towards themedia field.
2.As an English major,it is important to organize translation knowledge on the job responsibility,experience the real translation work.
3.Learn to analyze and solvepractical problems by different methods,such as turning to experienced editor,searching in the internet,referring to dictionaries or published newspapers orarticles,etc.
4.Be familiar with the work ofprofessionals’ duties and newspaper procedures,seeing the shortage of myselfand strengthen my own knowledge in future study and gain the ability ofself-development.
5.Obtain more working experiencewhile making a preparation for my future career.Working and cooperating withother colleagues can enhance my team consciousness and develop my coordinationand collaboration capabilities,and also enhance my consciousness of responsibility.

第三行enable前面的to可以去掉,用and三个并列了.
第五行theinternship前面用点号吧,the大写
第八行to organize the knowledge of translation
第八行experience前面的点号去掉,加一个and,语法错误啊
第十三行and gain 改成 and gaining并列
第十四行开头那句话完全错了,没有主语没有谓语,只有一个短语,自己改一下吧,开头主语的话,是非谓语动词
再问： 谢谢 还有两部分能不能也帮我改一下~？ 好人一生平安！！！