大师作文网请帮我改一下四级这篇作文,给我打个分（最好用四级评分标准）,
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请帮我改一下四级这篇作文,给我打个分（最好用四级评分标准）,
topic the world is getting smaller and smaller
100词以上
包含以下要求 现代化的交通工具越来越发达
人与人之间的交往越来越频繁
结论
What is widely believed to us all that the world is getting smaller and smaller.With the development of modern transportation,it is convenient for people to travel from one place to another.Thanks to current technology ,we can go anywhere freely if we want.And there are transportations for us to choose.For instance ,planes,taxis,buses ,trains.
In addition,the communication with people all over the world is more frequent.Also the price of transportation is even cheap.We have majority of ways to keep correspondence with friends.Even though we are far away from ,we can communicate with each other easily.
All in all,the world now is becoming smaller.People have no difficulties in travell and communication.
作文总分142
topic the world is getting smaller and smaller
100词以上
包含以下要求 现代化的交通工具越来越发达
人与人之间的交往越来越频繁
结论
What is widely believed to us all that the world is getting smaller and smaller.With the development of modern transportation,it is convenient for people to travel from one place to another.Thanks to current technology ,we can go anywhere freely if we want.And there are transportations for us to choose.For instance ,planes,taxis,buses ,trains.
In addition,the communication with people all over the world is more frequent.Also the price of transportation is even cheap.We have majority of ways to keep correspondence with friends.Even though we are far away from ,we can communicate with each other easily.
All in all,the world now is becoming smaller.People have no difficulties in travell and communication.
作文总分142
12分吧,还可以,就是感觉好像语句都是套路,但是如果在考场的话,这样的句子也能得一个不错的分数,考场时间紧迫,难免会出现一些问题,即使考试的那个人是老师,我觉得他都不一定能得满分的,所以加油,不用担心,这个水平足以.
再问： 12分达到及格线了吗？？我应该从哪方面提高呢？？
再答： 你换算一下就知道了。
再问： 12分达到及格线了吗？？我应该从哪方面提高呢？？
再答： 你换算一下就知道了。