大师作文网哪位英语专业高手帮忙修改下面的小学英语个性演讲稿,急用,
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哪位英语专业高手帮忙修改下面的小学英语个性演讲稿,急用,
On sturday .I get up and ask mother:"what day is it today"?My mother says：“It's March 12th ."Oh,is tree planting day .we are go to the hill behind grandma home .We have bucket ,spade and sapling,I and my brother help my father to take the bucket and saplings.the bucket is very heavy .at noon,the sun shine on our head ,we are very hot and busy,my grandma says to our,your are hard woking,come here ,have lunch quickly!oh,how nice,we have chinken,fish ,potato and eggs.we have a good day!
On sturday .I get up and ask mother:"what day is it today"?My mother says：“It's March 12th ."Oh,is tree planting day .we are go to the hill behind grandma home .We have bucket ,spade and sapling,I and my brother help my father to take the bucket and saplings.the bucket is very heavy .at noon,the sun shine on our head ,we are very hot and busy,my grandma says to our,your are hard woking,come here ,have lunch quickly!oh,how nice,we have chinken,fish ,potato and eggs.we have a good day!
1. we are go to the hill behind grandma home 我们去奶奶家后面的小山 grandma home 应该用所有格即grandma`s home 整句改为we （are going）/（will go ） to the hill behind grandma home
2. I and my brother改为 my mother and I
3. bucket ,spade and sapling这几个词全文都用复数
4 my grandma says to our改为 my grandma says to us
5 your are hard woking 改为 you are hard working（working hard）
6 Oh,is tree planting day 改为 Oh, it is tree planting day
mother grandma 前最好加上my
其实感觉全文都用过去式比较合适
2. I and my brother改为 my mother and I
3. bucket ,spade and sapling这几个词全文都用复数
4 my grandma says to our改为 my grandma says to us
5 your are hard woking 改为 you are hard working（working hard）
6 Oh,is tree planting day 改为 Oh, it is tree planting day
mother grandma 前最好加上my
其实感觉全文都用过去式比较合适