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请英语好一点的哥哥姐姐帮帮我,帮我看看下面这篇文章的错误,并给予详细的纠正
Vacation is coming.i'mreally tired these days.i want to have a retaxing vacation in hawali.
i'm leaving the first week in July and staying until septemer.i'm plans to have a very relaxing and interesting vacation.i'm walking on the beach,collect shells,going surfing,planing beach volleyball,lie on the beach and going swimming.i'm planning to spend time in the beautiful beach.i love nature.I hope i can forget all my problems!At night,i'm [仰望星空这个词怎么写?] and sleeping a lot .
i want to show you a my photos when i get back to school.
Oh!A great vacation!I can't wait!
请英语好一点的哥哥姐姐帮帮我,帮我看看下面这篇文章的错误,并给予详细的纠正
looking up to the starry sky
retaxing写错了,是relaxing吧
再问: 我的文章有什么语病没有?如果有什么错误 请复制原文加以注明和修正~~谢谢~~