大师作文网英语作业,谁能帮我看看.
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英语作业,谁能帮我看看.
Hey,
Tim. I'm glad to receive your email. Your travel was so amazing and wonderful.
In fact, I'm very eager to tell you that I've just returned from TianJin(SP)(>>Tianjin) in China.
We tasted a lot of delicous(SP)(>>delicious) snack and visited lots of famous places.
After we saw a movie, Cold Mountain, filled with affecting actions.
We were deeply affected by the hero who doesn't give up earning his truth love in the war.
Up to now, I still remember a song's name in the movie, 'I wish my baby was born'.
All in all, our travel were great.
I hope we will have a dinner at the weekend.
Hey,
Tim. I'm glad to receive your email. Your travel was so amazing and wonderful.
In fact, I'm very eager to tell you that I've just returned from TianJin(SP)(>>Tianjin) in China.
We tasted a lot of delicous(SP)(>>delicious) snack and visited lots of famous places.
After we saw a movie, Cold Mountain, filled with affecting actions.
We were deeply affected by the hero who doesn't give up earning his truth love in the war.
Up to now, I still remember a song's name in the movie, 'I wish my baby was born'.
All in all, our travel were great.
I hope we will have a dinner at the weekend.
1\Your travel 是不是逻辑上不对啊?后边可是出现的our travel
2、Tianjin是对的
3、very eager 可以删掉very ,eager已经很强烈了
4、 After改为then,或者after that
5\earning love 搭配不合适,purse 是不是好些
6、a song's name 应改为the name of the song
7\'I wish my baby were born'
8\our travel was great/wonderful/amazing
2、Tianjin是对的
3、very eager 可以删掉very ,eager已经很强烈了
4、 After改为then,或者after that
5\earning love 搭配不合适,purse 是不是好些
6、a song's name 应改为the name of the song
7\'I wish my baby were born'
8\our travel was great/wonderful/amazing