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我是新高一学生,这是一封写给未曾谋面的英语老师的信,请帮我挑刺(格式语法拼写啊神马的).

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我是新高一学生,这是一封写给未曾谋面的英语老师的信,请帮我挑刺(格式语法拼写啊神马的).
Dear English teacher:
My name is Grace.I am a girl of fifteen.I graduated from The second High School Affiliated to Fudan University.I do feel glad to be your student.
Fitst of all,I am warm-hearted .I think nothing in the world can delight
me so much as helping others.In that case,I have already done a lot of volunteer work .
In addition ,English is my favourite subject.In my opinion,English is not only beautiful but also useful.I am able to communicate with foreigners,if I master English .Therefore,I read a lot of English Newspapers to improve my English skills.
I will do my best in this new term.What’s more,I want to make friends with you.
Yours sincerely,
Grace
我是新高一学生,这是一封写给未曾谋面的英语老师的信,请帮我挑刺(格式语法拼写啊神马的).
首先,称谓后面要用点号而不是汉语的冒号!
其次,正文内容最好顶着左边写,叫做缩进式!当然空出两个字母也是可以的,叫做旗头式.
最后,祝好的部分可以顶着左边写或者是你写的位置也行!
关于文章:first拼写有误.
内容不错!语法用的也到位!