继续英语题目II.Improve the following for the best communicative ef

继续英语题目II.Improve the following for the best communicative effect
II.Improve the following for the best communicative effect (1 8 points)
1).Wang Ping is a junior student in School of Foreign Languages.He is from an underdeveloped village which is located in Hunan Province.( 3 points)
2).We entered the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.( 3 points)
3).Li is a new student.He comes from a southern province.He speaks a dialect.We find it hard to understand his dialect.( 3 points)
4).There is an iron pot that was hung over the fire.Bubblings and gurglings came
forth out of that pot.There was also a vague suggestive steaminess coming out.( 3 points)
5).You must first work out an outline for your paper,and then after you have done that,you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.( 3 points)
6).He heard that his father was ill.He was anxious to go home to see him.He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.( 3 points)
7).He gave many reasons for the failure,but the reasons he gave were not convincing.( 3 points)
8).This machine was jointly designed by the old engineer in collaboration with some of his younger colleagues.( 3 points)
9).Li is a new student.He comes from a southern province.He speaks a dialect.We find it hard to understand his dialect.( 3 points)
10).Mark Twain is a well-known American writer.His experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.( 3 points)
10).She grew up in Donora.It is a small town that is nestled in the rolling hills of western Pennsylvania.This is a place where everybody relied for their living on the local steel mill.(4)
11).We ( “We” here refers to the passengers on a train) slithered along a grassy hillside.We passed a strip of gravel.On the gravel some orange-helmeted workers sat.They were reading newspapers.( 3 points)
12) I’m a senior student in the English Department,coming from an underdeveloped village which is located in Shanxi Province.( 3 points)
13).Over the past two decades,thousands of multi-national companies have rushed into China.They invested in the largest market that is China in the world.The result is that numerous joint ventures are set up.(3 points)
14).Close to 100 water-color paintings that embrace the creative wisdom of master-hands and boast the magical,bold brush of promising young artists are on display here.(3 points)
15).There is an iron pot that was hung over the fire.Bubblings and gurglings came
forth out of that pot.There was also a vague suggestive steaminess coming out.( 3 points)
16).There was a pine tree that stood like a giant on the top of the mountain.It towered over the trees around it.(3 points)
17).The house had been burglarized.Smith couldn’t sleep for several months.( 3 points)

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1). Wang Ping is a junior student in School of Foreign Languages. He is from an underdeveloped village which is located in Hunan Province. ( 3 points)
王平是外国语学院二年级学生,他来自湖南省一个不发达的村庄.
2). We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us, and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves, and the prices were quite reasonable, and a lot of customers were buying them. ( 3 points)
我们走进商店,一个女销售员向我们问好,所有种类的鞋子都被摆在货架上,所有的价格都相当合理,许多顾客正在选购产品.
3). Li is a new student. He comes from a southern province. He speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand his dialect. ( 3 points)
李是一个来自南方省份的新学生,他说的方言我们很难能听懂.
4). There is an iron pot that was hung over the fire. Bubblings and gurglings came
forth out of that pot. There was also a vague suggestive steaminess coming out.( 3 points)
一口铁锅悬在篝火之上,泡泡和热水从锅里飞溅而出,同时热气也向外四溢.
5).You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then after you have done that, you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view. ( 3 points)
你首先要给你的论文定个提纲,然后再着手写.你需要收集各类的资料来作证你的观点.

6). He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket. ( 3 points)
当他得知他父亲生病,急切得想回家看望父亲.他起了个大早去车站买了一张票.
7). He gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing. ( 3 points)
他给失败找了很多理由,但所有理由都是那么苍白没有说服力.
8). This machine was jointly designed by the old engineer in collaboration with some of his younger colleagues. ( 3 points)
这个机器由一个老工程师和他三个年轻同事协理设计完成.
9). Li is a new student. He comes from a southern province. He speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand his dialect. ( 3 points)
同第三题
10). Mark Twain is a well-known American writer. His experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer. ( 3 points)
马克吐温是美国知名作家.他在轮船上当驾驶员的经历毫无疑问是他成为一个著名作家的重要因素.
10). She grew up in Donora. It is a small town that is nestled in the rolling hills of western Pennsylvania. This is a place where everybody relied for their living on the local steel mill. (4)
她在Donra长大,那是一个紧挨西宾夕法尼亚山的小镇.那里的人们都靠当地的钢铁厂过活.
11). We ( “We” here refers to the passengers on a train) slithered along a grassy hillside. We passed a strip of gravel. On the gravel some orange-helmeted workers sat. They were reading newspapers. ( 3 points)
人们的视野随着火车穿越山腰.望及一片的沙砾,许多戴着黄头盔的工人正坐在沙砾上看报纸.
12) I’m a senior student in the English Department, coming from an underdeveloped village which is located in Shanxi Province. ( 3 points)
我是一名英语系的高年级学生,我来自陕西省一个不发达的小村庄.
13). Over the past two decades, thousands of multi-national companies have rushed into China. They invested in the largest market that is China in the world. The result is that numerous joint ventures are set up. (3 points)
在过去的二十年间,上千家跨国公司蜂拥进中国.他们在中国这个世界上最大的市场上投资.其结果是数量庞大的合资公司纷纷成立.
14). Close to 100 water-color paintings that embrace the creative wisdom of master-hands and boast the magical, bold brush of promising young artists are on display here. (3 points)
靠近那100幅水彩画,走近大师的传造性、不可思议的作品,那个前途无量的年轻艺术家的作品正在展出.
15). There is an iron pot that was hung over the fire. Bubblings and gurglings came
forth out of that pot. There was also a vague suggestive steaminess coming out.( 3 points)
参考题目4
16). There was a pine tree that stood like a giant on the top of the mountain. It towered over the trees around it. (3 points)
在那山之颠有一颗松树像巨人般耸立,在环绕它的其他树木中凸显出来.
17). The house had been burglarized. Smith couldn’t sleep for several months. ( 3 points)
这间房子被偷盗过.斯密斯这几个月都不能安心睡觉.