帮我改改英语小短文这是一个演讲,我show很多图片,而且编造一个比较浪漫的故事.但实际上不是真实的.然后我进行下面的演说
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帮我改改英语小短文
这是一个演讲,我show很多图片,而且编造一个比较浪漫的故事.但实际上不是真实的.然后我进行下面的演说:
In our life,we have too often experienced the situation where we click the mouse furiously,and oceans of pictures flash through our eyes.We just spare a little glance on it.However,sometimes,the scene in those pictures could really provide us with a big room for imagination.We might be exited to see a great beach where several kids were building a sand castle leaving a string of footprints; a big grayish mountain and human is just like a column of ants; or the soft wave ripple through the edgeless gold cornfield.
The fact is that we are not that lucky to live in those virtual realities,but we still fancy that one day,we would be able to do so.
So think of the question.When appreciating a picture,fancy about,What if I were there?What if the boy was me?
I love to do so,so most of the time when I see a picture,I could have a good imagination on it.
As you have guessed so,the whole story that I have recounted to you is all made up.But it really makes sense!
而且把错的地方用括号标出来,
小弟十分感谢,from the bottom of my heart!
这是一个演讲,我show很多图片,而且编造一个比较浪漫的故事.但实际上不是真实的.然后我进行下面的演说:
In our life,we have too often experienced the situation where we click the mouse furiously,and oceans of pictures flash through our eyes.We just spare a little glance on it.However,sometimes,the scene in those pictures could really provide us with a big room for imagination.We might be exited to see a great beach where several kids were building a sand castle leaving a string of footprints; a big grayish mountain and human is just like a column of ants; or the soft wave ripple through the edgeless gold cornfield.
The fact is that we are not that lucky to live in those virtual realities,but we still fancy that one day,we would be able to do so.
So think of the question.When appreciating a picture,fancy about,What if I were there?What if the boy was me?
I love to do so,so most of the time when I see a picture,I could have a good imagination on it.
As you have guessed so,the whole story that I have recounted to you is all made up.But it really makes sense!
而且把错的地方用括号标出来,
小弟十分感谢,from the bottom of my heart!
In our life, we have too often experienced the situation where we click the mouse furiously, and oceans of pictures flash through our eyes. We just spare a (little) CASUAL glance on (it) THEM. However, sometimes, the (sceneS) in those pictures (could) CAN really provide us with (a big) A LOT OF room for imagination. We (might) MAY be (exCited) to see a great beach where several kids (were) ARE building a sand castle leaving a string of footprints IN THE SAND; ON TOP OF a big grayish mountain, WHERE (and human) PEOPLE BELOW SEEM (is) just like a column of ants; or (the) soft waveS (ripple) RIPPLING through the edgeless, (gold)GLISTENING cornfield.
The fact is that we are not that lucky to live in those virtual realities, but we still fancy that one day, we (would) WILL be able to do so.
So think of the question. When appreciating (a) THESE pictureS, (fancy about) IMAGINE: What if I were there? What if the boy was me?
I love to do (so,) JUST THAT. So most of the time when I see a picture, I (could) have a good (imagination) IMAGINARY JOURNEY on it.
As you MAY have guessed (so), the whole story that I have JUST recounted to you is all made up. But it really makes sense TO ME!
The fact is that we are not that lucky to live in those virtual realities, but we still fancy that one day, we (would) WILL be able to do so.
So think of the question. When appreciating (a) THESE pictureS, (fancy about) IMAGINE: What if I were there? What if the boy was me?
I love to do (so,) JUST THAT. So most of the time when I see a picture, I (could) have a good (imagination) IMAGINARY JOURNEY on it.
As you MAY have guessed (so), the whole story that I have JUST recounted to you is all made up. But it really makes sense TO ME!
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