英语翻译Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.I am ve

英语翻译
Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.I am very glad to be here for your interview.My name is Song Yonghao,I am 22 years old.I come from Luoyang,a very beautiful ancient city.my undergraduate period will be accomplished in Chang'an university in July,2004；and now,I am trying my best for obtaining a key to Tongji University.
Generally speaking,I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in.I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.When I was sophomore,I found web design very interesting,so I learned it very hard.To weaver a homepage for myself,I stayed with my personal computer for half a month,and I am the first one in my class who own his homepage.Furthermore,I am a person with great perseverance.During the days preparing for the first examination,I insist on running every day,no matter what the weather was like.And just owning to this,I could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end.
Well,in my spare time,I like basketball,tennis and Chinese chess.Also English is my favorite.I often go to English corner to practise my oral English on every Thursday,and write compositions to improve my written ability.But I know my English is not good enough,I will continue studying.
Ok,that is all,thank you for your attention.

亲爱的老师,教授,早上好.很高兴在这里参加你们的面试.我叫宋永浩（随便）,今年22岁.我来自洛阳,一个美丽而古老的城市.2004年七月我将完成在长安大学的本科学业,现在我正尽最大努力争取进入同济大学.
总的来说,我是个非常努力的学生,尤其在我感兴趣的方面.不管多难的事情我都将尽最大努力去完成.当我在大二的时候,我发现网页设计非常有趣,所以我非常努力地学习.为了给自己设计个主页,我在电脑前工作了一个半月,最终我成为班里第一个拥有自己主页的人.此外,我是一个很有毅力的人.在准备初试的这些天里,我坚持每天跑步,无论天气如何.正因如此,我才可以专注于我的学业,并最终成功.
在业余时间里,我喜欢篮球、网球和中国象棋.当然英语是我的最爱.我经常去在每周四去英语角练习口语,并且写作文来提高写作能力.但是我知道我的英语还不是很好,我会继续学习.
就这些,多谢关照.
有几处明显的语言及逻辑问题,感觉像高中生写的.