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大家帮我看一下这段话有无语法错误~
My favourite advertisement is Colgate advertisement.I think that its advertising verbal is very
interesting This is why I like it.This advertising verbal is known by much audience.The verbal is 'Our
aim is no bad tooth!'.Its Chinese meaning is "我们的目标是没有蛀牙".
When I hear this advertising verbal for the first time i was attracted by it.This words is spoken by a group of child.The children are all very cute and their vice is so sweet.This is only very simple words.But the pure voice of the children has made many persons who didn't treasure theirselves' tooth know the importance of tooth.
这个是一段Speech,明天就要讲了,临时想出来的饿,大家看看有没有什么语法方面的问题.只要语法方面就好了.帮我纠正啊!
大家帮我看一下这段话有无语法错误~
This words is spoken by a group of child. 改成
These words are spoken by a group of children.
vice 应该是voice吧
This is only very simple words改成
These are only very simple words
后面两个tooth都改teeth吧,可数名词单数没有那样用的