润色英语翻译,急!（1.改正文章中所有的语法错误 2.润色）

润色英语翻译,急!（1.改正文章中所有的语法错误 2.润色）
Good morning my dear teacher and classmates.
I am glad to have the opportunity of making this presentation. The main area that I intend to cover in this presentation is advertising translation.

First, let’s talk about peculiarities of advertising translation. they must be attractive,so they can catch the reader’s attention, and also, be creative,it could project an image. And then, impressive. Of course, to produce an impact. And I think the most important one, persuasive, because only be persuasive could urge the reader to act.
And now, let me introduce some skills of advertising translation.

First,Play on words（文字游戏）
Second,use a double meaning（双关语）
Third ,Amplification（增译法）
And then,Loan translation（套译法）
The last one,Creative translation （创译法）
文字游戏：
利用谐音以及一些经典的句型它能使广告形象生动,风趣幽默,给所宣传的商品增添魅力.
We can use the partial tone and some key sentences. They can make the image of the advertisement vivid, charm and humor, so as to increase charm force to the commodity propagated.
双关语
These ads translation based on social and cultural, with a distinctive, unique language form of pun, not only enhance the attractiveness of advertising, but also reflect the art of the advertising language.
这些广告以人们原有的社会、文化知识为基础,以鲜明、独特的语言形式形成双关,既增强了广告的吸引力,又体现了广告语言的艺术性,
增译法
These ads need to add some important information,to make it detailed and clear.
套译法
套用中英文的固有表达模式、俗语、诗词及流行语,巧妙地使译文符合消费者的心理习惯,从而达到宣传效果.
Using the language’s natural expression patterns, phrase, poem and popular words and sentences to make the ads conformity to consumers’ custom, so as to achieve the better promotional effect.

创译法
创译法是指翻译时不拘泥于原意义与语音进行大胆创新,甚至取一个新名,以求译名与原名在功能或效果上的对等.
Creative translation refers to the translation is not be limited to the
Original meaning and pronunciation. even with a brand new sentence, in order to make the translation has equality with the Original in function or effect .

That’s all ,thank you.

我只修改我认为比较明显的问题.修改意见供您参考.
Good morning my dear teacher and classmates.
I am glad to have the opportunity of making this presentation. The topic of my presentation is advertisement translation.

First, let’s talk about peculiarities of advertisement translation. they must be attractive so they can catch the reader’s attention, and be creative so they could be impressive and produce an impact. It will be even better if they can project an image. And I think the most important one, being persuasive, because then they could urge the reader to act.
And now, let me introduce some skills (practices? methods?) of advertisement translation.

First,Play on words（文字游戏）
Second,use a double meaning（双关语）
Third ,Amplification（增译法）
And then,Loan translation（套译法）
The last one,Creative translation （创译法）
文字游戏：Word play
利用谐音以及一些经典的句型它能使广告形象生动,风趣幽默,给所宣传的商品增添魅力.
We can use the partial sound (or a different word with similar sound ?) and some key sentences. They can make the image of the advertisement vivid, charming and humorous, so as to increase the appeal of the commodity propagated.
双关语 Double meaning
These ads translation are based on social and cultural implications, with a distinctive, unique language form of pun, not only to enhance the attractiveness of advertising, but also reflect the art of the advertising language.
这些广告以人们原有的社会、文化知识为基础,以鲜明、独特的语言形式形成双关,既增强了广告的吸引力,又体现了广告语言的艺术性,
增译法
These ads need to add some important information,to make it detailed and clear.
套译法
套用中英文的固有表达模式、俗语、诗词及流行语,巧妙地使译文符合消费者的心理习惯,从而达到宣传效果.
Using the language’s natural expression patterns, phrases, poems and popular words and sentences to make the ads conform to consumers’ custom, so as to achieve the better promotional effect.

创译法
创译法是指翻译时不拘泥于原意义与语音进行大胆创新,甚至取一个新名,以求译名与原名在功能或效果上的对等.
Creative translation refers to the translation that is not be limited to the original meaning and pronunciation. It can even be a brand new sentence, in order to make the translation has equal function or effect as the original.
That’s all ,thank you.
归纳得很好.我学习了.不过,这样的presentation 有些例子就更好了.
Good luck with your presentation.