大师作文网请大家帮忙改一下这篇英语演讲稿(初中水平)
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请大家帮忙改一下这篇英语演讲稿(初中水平)
My family
Hello,everyone!I’m proud to make a speech here.
I am fortunate to live in a very happy family.My mother and father are very caring of me.We have a lot of fun together.My father is a teacher,he loves his job.My mother is a housewife,everyday she has a lot of housework to do.In winter,although the weather is cold,our house is always very warm.
At the weekends,my father like to read books and go fishing.He is good at going fishing.My mother likes to cook us interesting food for us.She was a good taste food for sweet tooth.We always have a very nice weekend together.
I look forward to having a lot of nice memories with my family.
I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
That’s all.Thank you!
She was a good taste food for sweet tooth.这个句子究竟有没有问题?
我感觉好像要把was改成has,
改好的可以通过站内信发给我或者直接发在这里：
My family
Hello,everyone!I’m proud to make a speech here.
I am fortunate to live in a very happy family.My mother and father are very caring of me.We have a lot of fun together.My father is a teacher,he loves his job.My mother is a housewife,everyday she has a lot of housework to do.In winter,although the weather is cold,our house is always very warm.
At the weekends,my father like to read books and go fishing.He is good at going fishing.My mother likes to cook us interesting food for us.She was a good taste food for sweet tooth.We always have a very nice weekend together.
I look forward to having a lot of nice memories with my family.
I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
That’s all.Thank you!
She was a good taste food for sweet tooth.这个句子究竟有没有问题?
我感觉好像要把was改成has,
改好的可以通过站内信发给我或者直接发在这里：
My family
Hello,everyone!I’m honored(不是自豪,还是感到荣幸) to deliver（这是做演讲的短语,不用make） a speech here.
I am fortunate to live in a very happy family.My mother and father love me very much.We have a lot of fun together.My father is a teacher,he loves his job.My mother is a housewife,everyday she has a lot of housework to do.In winter,although the weather is cold,our house is always very warm.
At the weekends,my father likes reading books and going fishing.He is good at fishing.My mother likes cooking delicious food for us.She is really good at making dessert which to us sweet tooth is the most tasty food in the world.（她擅长制作甜品,对我们这些喜爱甜食的家伙来说可谓人间至味.） We always have a very nice weekend together.
I always cherish the nice memories of my family,moved by every moment.（我一直珍藏着我对这个家的美好回忆,为每个瞬间而感动）
I love everyone in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
That’s all.Thank you!
语法没有太大毛病,不过能说出sweet tooth真是厉害!不过用起来好像有点语句不通顺,给改了一下...没有改变总的文章,觉得这样说就可以了,平实的语言最能反映温馨了.
Hello,everyone!I’m honored(不是自豪,还是感到荣幸) to deliver（这是做演讲的短语,不用make） a speech here.
I am fortunate to live in a very happy family.My mother and father love me very much.We have a lot of fun together.My father is a teacher,he loves his job.My mother is a housewife,everyday she has a lot of housework to do.In winter,although the weather is cold,our house is always very warm.
At the weekends,my father likes reading books and going fishing.He is good at fishing.My mother likes cooking delicious food for us.She is really good at making dessert which to us sweet tooth is the most tasty food in the world.（她擅长制作甜品,对我们这些喜爱甜食的家伙来说可谓人间至味.） We always have a very nice weekend together.
I always cherish the nice memories of my family,moved by every moment.（我一直珍藏着我对这个家的美好回忆,为每个瞬间而感动）
I love everyone in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
That’s all.Thank you!
语法没有太大毛病,不过能说出sweet tooth真是厉害!不过用起来好像有点语句不通顺,给改了一下...没有改变总的文章,觉得这样说就可以了,平实的语言最能反映温馨了.