大师作文网下面这段英文可有语法错误?
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下面这段英文可有语法错误?
I am a enthusiastic and cheerful person,with a strong enterprising spirit,team spirit,having a stable personality and high sense of responsibility.And I have a stronger ability to adapt to the new environment,working well with a multi-cultural and diverse work force.I have good performance at school and won several scholarships,and have a good knowledge of AutoCAD,UG,Pro-E and other 3D design software.Moreover,I like to try new things,having strong the ability to accept new things,and have a strong curiosity and creativity.
I am a enthusiastic and cheerful person,with a strong enterprising spirit,team spirit,having a stable personality and high sense of responsibility.And I have a stronger ability to adapt to the new environment,working well with a multi-cultural and diverse work force.I have good performance at school and won several scholarships,and have a good knowledge of AutoCAD,UG,Pro-E and other 3D design software.Moreover,I like to try new things,having strong the ability to accept new things,and have a strong curiosity and creativity.
spirit其实不如用awareness好,你体会一下.第一句拆开来吧,别用长句,这种长句看着不舒服的.第二句And I have a strong (不是stronger,sorry英语里面没有这样的比较的,中文是通的,可是英语里不对）ability to adapt(此处没有to)the new environment,.and various(不要用diverse,diverse一般形容物种多样性还差不多)work pressure（压力是压力,不是force,force是指物理上的,pressure是指精神上的）.后面是 having strong ability(没有the).整个改掉,改成Moreover,I'm curious about new things in my life and always try to experience it.Besides,I'm very creative.这个比你原来好点.
另祝找工作成功啊,我也大四来着~加油
再问：
已修改，能不能帮我改一下其中的连接词，感觉用的不好。。。。谢谢
再答： awareness和awareness之间要加and; possess，这个你拼写错了. software要加s, 最后那个besides改成after all. 连词没什么必要改，主要是要有很不一样的感觉就要大改文章。。。一般这些连词没什么问题
另祝找工作成功啊,我也大四来着~加油
再问：
已修改，能不能帮我改一下其中的连接词，感觉用的不好。。。。谢谢再答： awareness和awareness之间要加and; possess，这个你拼写错了. software要加s, 最后那个besides改成after all. 连词没什么必要改，主要是要有很不一样的感觉就要大改文章。。。一般这些连词没什么问题