谁帮我修改这首歌的中文翻译 HIM的and love said now

谁帮我修改这首歌的中文翻译 HIM的and love said now
我眼中的中文意境
H.I.M - and love said no 爱却说不
And love's light blue 爱曾是一道淡蓝的光芒
led me to you, 引领我
from the emptiness that had become my home. 脱离空虚的境地,走向你
love's lies, cruel, 爱曾是一堆残酷的谎言
introduced me to you. 将我带进你的世界
and that moment, i knew that i was out of hope. 那一刻,我知道自己已无希冀
"kill me," i begged, and Love said no “杀了我吧”,我企求道,爱却说不
leave me for dead and let me go. 它让我陪伴亡灵并放了我
"kill me," i cried, and Love said no. “杀了我吧”,我哭喊道,爱却说不
"kill me," i cried, and Love said no. “杀了我吧”,我哭喊道,而爱却说不
love's icy tomb, dug open for you, 如今,爱成了一座冰冷的坟墓
lies in a cemetery that bears my name. 坐落在一个以我名字命名的墓地里,墓口已为凿开
love's violent tune from me to you, 如今,爱成了我献给你的一支粗暴的曲调
rips your heart out and leaves you bleeding 它掏出了你的心,你身体淌着血,
with a smile on your face. 脸上却挂着微笑
"kill me," i begged, and Love said no.
leave me for dead and let me go.
"kill me," i cried, and Love said no. “杀了我吧”,我企求道,爱却说不
"kill me," i cried, and Love said no.
love's light blue took me from you, 爱是那道淡蓝的光 从你身边带走了我
and that moment i knew that i was out of hope 那一刻,我再一次绝望了
again.
"kill me," i begged, and Love said no.
leave me for dead and let me go.
"kill me," i cried, and Love said no.
"kill me," i cried, and Love said no.
love said no,
and love said no.

你翻译的挺好的啊,其实翻译歌词还是和个人性格,爱好,感受有关的!不过这个歌词给人感觉挺恐怖的!