大师作文网会英语的帮我改一篇简单的英语作文,
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会英语的帮我改一篇简单的英语作文,
我英语超烂的.帮我改改吧.
Welcome to my class room,You can see my good friends.Look,That girl is drawing now,Her name is Gina,She drawing very well.Look at the boy.His name is Li Lei,He is doing his homework now.He is very busy.Kate also very busy,He is cleaning his room.Li juan is reading book,She think that book is interesting.Next,You can see Mike and Tony playing ping-pong,Henry playing football now.He can play football but he can’t play well.Look the girl eating lunch now.She is my good friend——Jean.
How do you feel
我英语超烂的.帮我改改吧.
Welcome to my class room,You can see my good friends.Look,That girl is drawing now,Her name is Gina,She drawing very well.Look at the boy.His name is Li Lei,He is doing his homework now.He is very busy.Kate also very busy,He is cleaning his room.Li juan is reading book,She think that book is interesting.Next,You can see Mike and Tony playing ping-pong,Henry playing football now.He can play football but he can’t play well.Look the girl eating lunch now.She is my good friend——Jean.
How do you feel
你文章的问题有以下几点：
1.“she drawing very well”应改为“she draws very well”因为“三单”嘛!
2.“She think that book is interesting”应改为“She thinks that book is interesting”也因为“三单”!
3.“Henry playing football now”应改为“Henry is playing football now”因为“be+doing”现在进行时.
4.“Look the girl eating lunch now”应改为“Look at the girl is having lunch now”同3的解释!
1.“she drawing very well”应改为“she draws very well”因为“三单”嘛!
2.“She think that book is interesting”应改为“She thinks that book is interesting”也因为“三单”!
3.“Henry playing football now”应改为“Henry is playing football now”因为“be+doing”现在进行时.
4.“Look the girl eating lunch now”应改为“Look at the girl is having lunch now”同3的解释!