大师作文网请问这篇短文能得多少分?
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请问这篇短文能得多少分?
【要求】
How should Parents Help Children to Be independent?
1、 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2、 为了孩子独立,父母应该……
【评分标准】
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
—— 基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误
【答卷】
Some parents,in the presence【脑子一犯浑把present写成名词了】,always help their children to deal with all their trouble ,Which mainly shows in their life and other side,Obviously,It is hard to develop children‘s ability of independence,In other words,There is no need for parent to do so,On the contract.
Parents should try their’s best to make their children to be independent,In the first place,Parents had better consciously teached【taugh一紧张写错了】 their children to settle their trouble by themself【脑子再次犯浑】,If their children have met some trouble hard to settle by themself【如上】,Then,Parents could properly assist thier childer.What is more,Parents should tell children how to deal with the trouble than to directly help them,By doing which can their children easily settle their trouble in their future and now.
满分30.
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
—— 基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误
【要求】
How should Parents Help Children to Be independent?
1、 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2、 为了孩子独立,父母应该……
【评分标准】
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
—— 基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误
【答卷】
Some parents,in the presence【脑子一犯浑把present写成名词了】,always help their children to deal with all their trouble ,Which mainly shows in their life and other side,Obviously,It is hard to develop children‘s ability of independence,In other words,There is no need for parent to do so,On the contract.
Parents should try their’s best to make their children to be independent,In the first place,Parents had better consciously teached【taugh一紧张写错了】 their children to settle their trouble by themself【脑子再次犯浑】,If their children have met some trouble hard to settle by themself【如上】,Then,Parents could properly assist thier childer.What is more,Parents should tell children how to deal with the trouble than to directly help them,By doing which can their children easily settle their trouble in their future and now.
满分30.
28分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好.基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.
22分—— 切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误.（单复数,冠词,拼写,大小写）
16分 —— 基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.（时态混乱,句子成分搭配不当）
—— 基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误
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其实可以改变一下句子的用法,不用一直重复用一个.
deal with their trouble 可以改成
settle their own problem/trouble
handle their trouble
还有少许的错字,有些事不是用翻译机啊?XD
不过基本上很不错了.
加油哦!
其实可以改变一下句子的用法,不用一直重复用一个.
deal with their trouble 可以改成
settle their own problem/trouble
handle their trouble
还有少许的错字,有些事不是用翻译机啊?XD
不过基本上很不错了.
加油哦!