大师作文网帮我检查一下这封信有没有错误 ,是给日本的教授写的,不妥当的地方,请指出来,
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帮我检查一下这封信有没有错误 ,是给日本的教授写的,不妥当的地方,请指出来,
I am a student from China and sorry to bother you at this time.
My name is Tou bunhaku,and now I am studying Japanese in human-academy
Japanese language school Tokyo Campus.
In July,2008,I graudated from XXXX majoring in Computer Application
Technology with mainly study of basic knowledge of computer,network,and
software.
I worked in a coalmine in my hometown after graduation at Network Security
and Control for a year.I am surprised by Japanese technique and “made in
Japan”.So I think studying in Japan would improve my ability,in order that
I came to Japan.
From the college,I have been very interested in Internet,I think Internet
brings us disclosure of personal information,not only convenience.So when I
know content of your research,I do hope to be your research student,and
study in the area of personal information protection under the guidance of
you .
Thanks for your time,looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours
I am a student from China and sorry to bother you at this time.
My name is Tou bunhaku,and now I am studying Japanese in human-academy
Japanese language school Tokyo Campus.
In July,2008,I graudated from XXXX majoring in Computer Application
Technology with mainly study of basic knowledge of computer,network,and
software.
I worked in a coalmine in my hometown after graduation at Network Security
and Control for a year.I am surprised by Japanese technique and “made in
Japan”.So I think studying in Japan would improve my ability,in order that
I came to Japan.
From the college,I have been very interested in Internet,I think Internet
brings us disclosure of personal information,not only convenience.So when I
know content of your research,I do hope to be your research student,and
study in the area of personal information protection under the guidance of
you .
Thanks for your time,looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours
当然有了.你BOTHER 那个教授,你怎么知道他是什么时候收到,我觉得去掉AT THIS TIME.不过这估计也算不上是BOTHER,如果他看了这个词可能下面的都不看了.还有,你真的要寄给教授,怎么感觉内容好浅显.
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