大师作文网求老师修改一下这篇英语演讲稿
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求老师修改一下这篇英语演讲稿
With the development of the Internet,many people are used to shopping on line.It has become a fashion in our daily life
.Some of our students also join the group shopping on line has many advantages.Just with a click of the mouse.You can buy what you are interested in without going outdoors.You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time.When shopping on line,you can choose from more varieties of goods,whose prices are generally lower
Every coin has two sides ,its disadvantages are obvious too.
With the development of the Internet,many people are used to shopping on line.It has become a fashion in our daily life
.Some of our students also join the group shopping on line has many advantages.Just with a click of the mouse.You can buy what you are interested in without going outdoors.You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time.When shopping on line,you can choose from more varieties of goods,whose prices are generally lower
Every coin has two sides ,its disadvantages are obvious too.
Some of our students also join the group shopping on line has many advantages. 中间group少了一个标点符号；Just with a click of the mouse. 应该是逗号而不是句号.save time应该是saving time.其他的都写得很好了.