大家帮我看看这段英语有没有错
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大家帮我看看这段英语有没有错
My) Dear friend,
Do you still remember me?How are you doing these days?
I'm now a junior 2 student.My school is the best in my city,which lies on Culture Road.My school is so large that there are many students in it.And most students here are very excellent.
I have a happy family because Dad is very humorous.Mum is a little strict with me,but she cares about me a lot.
There are too many exams which bring some pressure in me,so I am fond of listening to music to relax myself.
Hope that you can write back soon.
And wish you happy and healthy!
Yours,
XXX
My) Dear friend,
Do you still remember me?How are you doing these days?
I'm now a junior 2 student.My school is the best in my city,which lies on Culture Road.My school is so large that there are many students in it.And most students here are very excellent.
I have a happy family because Dad is very humorous.Mum is a little strict with me,but she cares about me a lot.
There are too many exams which bring some pressure in me,so I am fond of listening to music to relax myself.
Hope that you can write back soon.
And wish you happy and healthy!
Yours,
XXX
1.I'm now a junior 2 student (好象没这说法,应为I am a student in grade two of junior middle school)
2.which lies on Culture Road (besides/at a side of Cultural Road)
3.There are too many exams which bring some pressure in (用on)
写得不错.
2.which lies on Culture Road (besides/at a side of Cultural Road)
3.There are too many exams which bring some pressure in (用on)
写得不错.