大师作文网英语改错题 一共有十个错误 第一行跟最后一行没有错误
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英语改错题 一共有十个错误 第一行跟最后一行没有错误
Since time immemorial,humans have acknowledged their need to communicate with each another.Communication evolved from cave drawings to the beating of drums and
from hieroglyphics to the inventing of the telephone.The evolution of communication
literally closed the gap between humans and made the world a smaller place to live on.
Now with the ubiquitous mobile phone,we seem to be on call 24/7 which makes
us really wondered whether we are masters of technology or whether we are
slaves to it.Recent surveys reveal that majority of the population do not switch
of their phones,opting instead to constantly be reachable.And with the smartphone,
this phenomenon of being constantly available is taken on a notch.
The smartphone is now actually a mini computer that allows us to be connect to
social media and even to watch movies on the go,whilst function as an
alarm clock and torchlight rolled into one.There needs to be better work-life balance.
Since time immemorial,humans have acknowledged their need to communicate with each another.Communication evolved from cave drawings to the beating of drums and
from hieroglyphics to the inventing of the telephone.The evolution of communication
literally closed the gap between humans and made the world a smaller place to live on.
Now with the ubiquitous mobile phone,we seem to be on call 24/7 which makes
us really wondered whether we are masters of technology or whether we are
slaves to it.Recent surveys reveal that majority of the population do not switch
of their phones,opting instead to constantly be reachable.And with the smartphone,
this phenomenon of being constantly available is taken on a notch.
The smartphone is now actually a mini computer that allows us to be connect to
social media and even to watch movies on the go,whilst function as an
alarm clock and torchlight rolled into one.There needs to be better work-life balance.
2.evolved -> has evolved
3.inventing -> invention
4.live on -> live in
5.which -> ,which
6.or whether -> or that
7.majority -> the majority
8.of ->off
9.is ->has
10.connect ->connected
11.function ->functions
3.inventing -> invention
4.live on -> live in
5.which -> ,which
6.or whether -> or that
7.majority -> the majority
8.of ->off
9.is ->has
10.connect ->connected
11.function ->functions