港大的自我简介,请用英文简述报读香港大学的原因,选择志愿的考虑及对未来的展望或其他相关的资料.(250字内)I‘m an

港大的自我简介,
请用英文简述报读香港大学的原因,选择志愿的考虑及对未来的展望或其他相关的资料.(250字内)
I‘m an ordinary graduate from the middle school attached to Yunnan Normal University.The reason why I choose to apply for HKU is that it is an ideal place for me to get higher level education.because of the fact that HKU enjoys good reputation all over the world,students and professions from different countries are attracted by HKU’sacademic atmosphere.And I,as one of thousands of students applying HKU,am eager to have an opportunity to study and communicate with those excellent schoolmates.I firmly believe I can broaden my horizon and get close to the world during my study in HKU.That's why I choose HKU as my Plan A in the college application.
When it comes to academic interests,I‘d like to study for BEN.I love creation and design,which I think are the key to a country’s development.China,as a rising star in the world,requires creation as a motivation to keep shining and heated.so,I want to major in engineering to do research and design products to make contribution to my country.
The time in university may be the most precious in one’s life.I’m convinced that HKU can give me a brighter future and it’s the best platform to realize my dream.
Looking forward to seeing you in HKU campus!

大致的框架条理清楚.主要内容两点.第一点为什么要选港大.第二点为什么选BEN专业.
建议如下：
1.在叙述为什么选港大这点上稍显啰嗦,表达意思上有部分处有点重复,条理稍嫌不清.
2.如果这是你要上交的申请材料,我建议不妨在语气上稍加一点对港大的赞美和表达一下去港大读书是你一直期望的事情.
3.第二点为什么选该专业这点上,写的比较明确和清晰.
我的改动.在第一点上改动稍大,仅作参考.
I‘m a graduate student from the Middle School Attached to Yunnan Normal University.I've always looked forward to enter HKU for my college education. HKU enjoys a good reputation in the world for its liberal spirit, serious academic atmosphere and profound cultural tradition,attracts outstanding students and intellectual professors from different countries. I am sure that I can broaden my horizon,establish my acadamic foundation and improve myself on all aspects here if I have this honor to be a member of this great school.
When it comes to academic interest,I'd like to choose BEN as my major.I've always have deep interests in creation and design.More importantly,I think they are the motivations for our country's further development.As a young man with belief and aspiration,I hope I can contribute to my country with my knowledge and abilities in the near future.
The time in university may be the most precious in one’s life. I’m convinced that HKU can give me a brighter future and help me to realize my dream.
按自己思路写的,仅作参考：）
望采纳：）
再问： 谢谢你的回复！这个就是申请材料。我现在想在专业选择这里加点内容： ‘我喜欢弄懂各类事物的原理、本质，喜欢钻研深究某一问题。喜欢动手制作、设计一些东西，因此选择工学。’ 然后在第一段强调一下‘港大的自由、多元，能让我自由选择自己的路，选择自己的的生活’ 能否帮我调整布局一下。大致意思就行，不胜感激。（会提高悬赏分的！）
再答： 我的改动： I‘m a graduate student from the Middle School Attached to Yunnan Normal University.I've always looked forward to enter HKU for my college education. HKU enjoys a good reputation in the world for its liberal spirit, serious academic atmosphere and profound cultural tradition,attracts outstanding students and intellectual professors from different countries.In addition,HKU has a free and diverse enviornment which provides students multiple choices for their future and allow them to pursue their own lifestyles that they truly desire.I am sure that I can broaden my horizon,establish my acadamic foundation and improve myself on all aspects here if I have this honor to be a member of this great school. When it comes to academic interest,I'd like to choose BEN as my major.I've always had deep interests in creation and design.I like to find out the principles and essences of things and explore a problem until I fully understand it,and I enjoy creating,designing and fabricating objects which gives me a great sense of achievement.More importantly,I think creation and design are the motivations for our country's further development.As a young man with belief and aspiration,I hope I can contribute to my country with my knowledge and abilities in the near future. The time in university may be the most precious in one’s life. I’m convinced that HKU can give me a brighter future and help me to realize my dream. 仅作参考：） Good luck,pal:)