英语翻译首先,就看翻译的精辟度,不看语法,因为语法都还没矫正(1)我的梦想,是把我所见到的每一个精彩瞬间记录下来,翻译1

英语翻译
首先,就看翻译的精辟度,不看语法,因为语法都还没矫正
(1)我的梦想,是把我所见到的每一个精彩瞬间记录下来,
翻译1:in my dream,i should pause every amazing times what my eyes on.
翻译2:my dream is pausing every amazing moment what i have seen.
(2)我认为,这次机会对我来说是一个提升自己,创造自身价值非常难得的机会.
翻译1:i think its really chance to myself,and it let me know the more things what i dont know,the more betters let me know.
翻译2:i think this opportunity advance to me,and it will creat my own values.
(3)希望可以让我有一个尽情表现自己的舞台,给大家带来更多的快乐,
翻译1:hope i may show,show more happyness to you.
翻译2:i hope that i have a stage to project myself where bring more happyness to you
(4)留下更多精彩的画面,成为一个优秀的摄影师.
翻译1:take more wanders greats pictures,in final to be a best photographer.
翻译2:Leaving more amaziZng moments to be a photographer perfectly.
(5)这份工作给了我后来的发展留下了个良好的铺垫
翻译1:because of last experience,i am very sure to upgread be a offical photographer.
翻译2:this work leave a great matting to my last development.
(6)后面的工作都是和工作室建立合作关系对外接拍各类商业照
翻译1:after that,i incept works of pic with a image studio,to be shoot pic which company need.
翻译2:after that,i alawys cooperate with image studio to shoot various bussiness photos.
(7)我个人比较喜欢的题材是上海的老式弄堂石库门
翻译1:my topic is shanghai old house style of stone gate.
翻译2:the topic my favour of is shanghai old house style of stone gate
(8)那里会给我各种各样的感觉 那也是受到我舅舅的影响
翻译1:i get any feels over there,it is also affect from my uncle.
翻译2:there give me different fellings,it is also effet from my uncle.
翻译1这个人是根据意思翻的
翻译2这个人是一个字一个字翻的

申明,均认真看过：
(1)我的梦想,是把我所见到的每一个精彩瞬间记录下来,
翻译2:my dream is pausing every amazing moment what i have seen.
(2)我认为,这次机会对我来说是一个提升自己,创造自身价值非常难得的机会.
翻译1:i think its really chance to myself,and it let me know the more things what i dont know,the more betters let me know.
(3)希望可以让我有一个尽情表现自己的舞台,给大家带来更多的快乐,
翻译2:i hope that i have a stage to project myself where bring more happyness to you
(4)留下更多精彩的画面,成为一个优秀的摄影师.
翻译2:Leaving more amaziZng moments to be a photographer perfectly.
(5)这份工作给了我后来的发展留下了个良好的铺垫
翻译1:because of last experience,i am very sure to upgread be a offical photographer.
(6)后面的工作都是和工作室建立合作关系对外接拍各类商业照
翻译2:after that,i alawys cooperate with image studio to shoot various bussiness photos.
(7)我个人比较喜欢的题材是上海的老式弄堂石库门
翻译2:the topic my favour of is shanghai old house style of stone gate
(8)那里会给我各种各样的感觉 那也是受到我舅舅的影响
翻译2:there give me different fellings,it is also effet from my uncle.