大师作文网英语短文改错 要有具体的解释
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英语短文改错 要有具体的解释
一共有10个错误Dear Mike,Are you feeling any better?As you know it ,our trip to Peace City is originally planned for June 15th .However ,it has been delayed until June 20th .Be certain to arrive at the school gate before 7:00 a.m .We'll first go on an hour guided tour of the Tiger River ,when will be followed by a visit to Lion Hill ,starting at about 9:00 a.m .Bring your lunch as we will be picnicking on the top of the hill at noon .On the afternoon ,we'll pay visit to the History Museum at 3:00 ,for which we have to pay another $ 5 ,so the totally cost will be $ 55 .We plan to return at about 5:00 p.m .Don't forget wear sports shoes.Hope you join us in the coming trip.Alice
一共有10个错误Dear Mike,Are you feeling any better?As you know it ,our trip to Peace City is originally planned for June 15th .However ,it has been delayed until June 20th .Be certain to arrive at the school gate before 7:00 a.m .We'll first go on an hour guided tour of the Tiger River ,when will be followed by a visit to Lion Hill ,starting at about 9:00 a.m .Bring your lunch as we will be picnicking on the top of the hill at noon .On the afternoon ,we'll pay visit to the History Museum at 3:00 ,for which we have to pay another $ 5 ,so the totally cost will be $ 55 .We plan to return at about 5:00 p.m .Don't forget wear sports shoes.Hope you join us in the coming trip.Alice
Dear Mike,Are you feeling any(much,感觉好与不好是不可数的,所以不能用any) better? As you know it（删除it,as you know是固定搭配,固定词组） , our trip to Peace City is originally planned for（on,在具体的某一天是用介词on） June 15th . However , it has been delayed until（具体的某一天用介词on） June 20th . Be certain to arrive at the school gate before 7:00 a.m . We'll first go on an hour guided（guiding,补充花一个小时的内容） tour of the Tiger River , when will be followed（follow,主语一致,不是我们被带到） by a visit to Lion Hill , starting at about 9:00 a.m . Bring your lunch as we will be picnicking on the top of the hill at noon . On（上午或下午应用介词in） the afternoon , we'll pay（加a,固定搭配：pay a visit to） visit to the History Museum at 3:00 , for which we have to pay another $ 5 , so the totally cost will be $ 55 . We plan to return at about 5:00 p.m . Don't forget （加to,wear是动词,要用动词不定式）wear sports shoes.Hope you join us in the coming trip.Alice