大师作文网英语高手帮忙看一下有没有语法错误
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英语高手帮忙看一下有没有语法错误
I am an Administrative at the currentcompany.My major job is assisting the recruiting work of HR,including but notlimited to employee registration,resignation,filing management,trainingscheduling,etc.I am also in charge of the supporting function includingprocuring and distributing stationery,printing name cards,order water,copying,posting,etc.At the same time,I also take crae of the registration,organization and filing of all kinds of files,collecting financial data,invoice management and release.
要工作介绍,请英语高手看看有没有语法或者是语汇搭配上的错误,
I am an Administrative at the currentcompany.My major job is assisting the recruiting work of HR,including but notlimited to employee registration,resignation,filing management,trainingscheduling,etc.I am also in charge of the supporting function includingprocuring and distributing stationery,printing name cards,order water,copying,posting,etc.At the same time,I also take crae of the registration,organization and filing of all kinds of files,collecting financial data,invoice management and release.
要工作介绍,请英语高手看看有没有语法或者是语汇搭配上的错误,
【修改建议】
1、I am an Administrative at the currentcompany.
※Administrative是形容词,用名词短语 administration staff 为妥.
2、My major job is assisting therecruiting work of HR,including but not limited to employee registration,resignation,filing management,training scheduling,etc.
※assist 指协助某人做某事,应该用 assistingHR to recruit（协助人力资源部招工）
※including部分去掉前面的逗号改为besides taking charge of employees’ signing-in and resignation,filemanagement,training scheduling,etc（除了负责员工签到和辞职、文件管理、培训日程安排等工作外）
3、I am also in charge of thesupporting function including procuring and distributing stationery,printingname cards,order water,copying,posting,etc.
※supportingfunction常用作数学专业术语“支撑函数”,改为subsidiary odd jobs（辅助性的杂务工作）
※order water不知指的是什么,不敢擅改.不过,与其他并列的动名词不匹配,建议删除.
4、At the same time,I also take careof the registration,organization and filing of all kinds of files,collectingfinancial data,invoice management and release.
take care of 后的并列部分有的是名词,有的是动名词,最好统一为registering,organizing,filing off all kinds of files,collecting financial data,managing invoicesand release.
filing of改为filing off（把…归档）
【修改后的全文】
I am an (administration staff) at the currentcompany.My major job is (assisting HR to recruit) (besides taking charge of employees’signing-in and resignation,file management),training scheduling,etc.I amalso in charge of the (subsidiary odd jobs,) including procuring and distributing stationery,printingname cards,copying,posting,etc.At the same time,I also take care of (registering,organizing,filing off all kinds of files,collecting financial data,managing invoicesand releasing).
1、I am an Administrative at the currentcompany.
※Administrative是形容词,用名词短语 administration staff 为妥.
2、My major job is assisting therecruiting work of HR,including but not limited to employee registration,resignation,filing management,training scheduling,etc.
※assist 指协助某人做某事,应该用 assistingHR to recruit（协助人力资源部招工）
※including部分去掉前面的逗号改为besides taking charge of employees’ signing-in and resignation,filemanagement,training scheduling,etc（除了负责员工签到和辞职、文件管理、培训日程安排等工作外）
3、I am also in charge of thesupporting function including procuring and distributing stationery,printingname cards,order water,copying,posting,etc.
※supportingfunction常用作数学专业术语“支撑函数”,改为subsidiary odd jobs（辅助性的杂务工作）
※order water不知指的是什么,不敢擅改.不过,与其他并列的动名词不匹配,建议删除.
4、At the same time,I also take careof the registration,organization and filing of all kinds of files,collectingfinancial data,invoice management and release.
take care of 后的并列部分有的是名词,有的是动名词,最好统一为registering,organizing,filing off all kinds of files,collecting financial data,managing invoicesand release.
filing of改为filing off（把…归档）
【修改后的全文】
I am an (administration staff) at the currentcompany.My major job is (assisting HR to recruit) (besides taking charge of employees’signing-in and resignation,file management),training scheduling,etc.I amalso in charge of the (subsidiary odd jobs,) including procuring and distributing stationery,printingname cards,copying,posting,etc.At the same time,I also take care of (registering,organizing,filing off all kinds of files,collecting financial data,managing invoicesand releasing).