大师作文网请英语大神检查一下下面这篇英语读后感有没有错误啊?
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请英语大神检查一下下面这篇英语读后感有没有错误啊?
The Book Report Of The Princess Diaries
This week I watched the movie called The Princess Diaries .It is a awesome movie.It made me think about it again and again.And I watched it much more time.And I shared it with my friends.
This movie main relates a story about a girl called Mia.She was a very common girl.Her was so common that she always be ignored by someone.She was so shy that she was fear to give a speech.And there are a lot of people often laugh at her.One day she was told that she was the princess of Genovia.She was surprised at it and she can’t accept it,she was hungry about his mother ‘lie.Her grandmother-the queen of Genovia try to reform her to make her looks like a princess and keep this secret to anybody.But finally the secret was spread by her Make-up artist.Her teachers and classmates was so surprised and a lot of classmates begin to make friends with her to make themselves become famous.But Mia didn’t want to be the Princess,she was scared and she decided to run away from home.But she occasionally saw the letter that his father write to her.Her father told her she love her and her mother and told her she must learn how to face to fear bravely.This letter changed Mia’s decision completely.She attended the ball and announced she would be the Princess of Genovia.
There is a important lines in this movie- courage is not the absence of fear,but rather the judgment that something else is more important than fear.（Mia’s father said to her)I am very agree with this point.Fear is not terrible if have enough courage to face it,believe ourselves can beat anything and we can be the winner like Mia.If Mia didn’t decide to be the Princess,maybe she can’t beat fear and can’t taste the relish of being the winner.
Finally,I have to say it was a wonderful movie,and I decide to watch the second part of The Princess Diaries because I can’t wait to know what’s matter with Mia in the palace.
The Book Report Of The Princess Diaries
This week I watched the movie called The Princess Diaries .It is a awesome movie.It made me think about it again and again.And I watched it much more time.And I shared it with my friends.
This movie main relates a story about a girl called Mia.She was a very common girl.Her was so common that she always be ignored by someone.She was so shy that she was fear to give a speech.And there are a lot of people often laugh at her.One day she was told that she was the princess of Genovia.She was surprised at it and she can’t accept it,she was hungry about his mother ‘lie.Her grandmother-the queen of Genovia try to reform her to make her looks like a princess and keep this secret to anybody.But finally the secret was spread by her Make-up artist.Her teachers and classmates was so surprised and a lot of classmates begin to make friends with her to make themselves become famous.But Mia didn’t want to be the Princess,she was scared and she decided to run away from home.But she occasionally saw the letter that his father write to her.Her father told her she love her and her mother and told her she must learn how to face to fear bravely.This letter changed Mia’s decision completely.She attended the ball and announced she would be the Princess of Genovia.
There is a important lines in this movie- courage is not the absence of fear,but rather the judgment that something else is more important than fear.（Mia’s father said to her)I am very agree with this point.Fear is not terrible if have enough courage to face it,believe ourselves can beat anything and we can be the winner like Mia.If Mia didn’t decide to be the Princess,maybe she can’t beat fear and can’t taste the relish of being the winner.
Finally,I have to say it was a wonderful movie,and I decide to watch the second part of The Princess Diaries because I can’t wait to know what’s matter with Mia in the palace.
1.注意时态和第三人称单数
发生过的最好用过去时,today I watched; 描述性的句子用一般现在时没错,不过需要注意第三人称单数,it has great influence on me.The movie tells a story...freinds are helpful
讲剧情,要么都用过去时,要么都用现在时,不能一会儿过去,一会儿现在,这个你统一改下
2.注意冠词的用法,it's an eductional movie.I have been thinking of the movie the whole day.
3.注意动词结构的用法
He was thought killing his wife
4.宾格不能做主语,them 改为they make 或which makes Anydy get away from the prison,
整体而言,词汇与句子的应用与组织方面很棒,内容非常好,会是个高分的文章,就是以上是一些基本的语法点,今后请多注意
发生过的最好用过去时,today I watched; 描述性的句子用一般现在时没错,不过需要注意第三人称单数,it has great influence on me.The movie tells a story...freinds are helpful
讲剧情,要么都用过去时,要么都用现在时,不能一会儿过去,一会儿现在,这个你统一改下
2.注意冠词的用法,it's an eductional movie.I have been thinking of the movie the whole day.
3.注意动词结构的用法
He was thought killing his wife
4.宾格不能做主语,them 改为they make 或which makes Anydy get away from the prison,
整体而言,词汇与句子的应用与组织方面很棒,内容非常好,会是个高分的文章,就是以上是一些基本的语法点,今后请多注意