短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改

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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误,每旬中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
    修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
    注意：
    1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第ll处起)不计分。

I went to the wildlife park together with parents last Sunday.There were lots of visitors who standing
before the ticket window. We waited long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the
park,I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animaIs that I quickened my steps through the crowd.
Unfortunately,I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but l had no luck. Wander
in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, but I had to walk home
covering as much as 5 kilometers.
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I went to the wildlife park together with∧parents last Sunday. There were lots of visitors who
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standing before the ticket window. We waited∧long time and bought three tickets. In the Tiger
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Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my
                                              4. Eager                  5.   frightening
steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated to my parents. I had a hard time look for
         6. from                                                                                                           7. looking
them, but I had no luck. Wander in the park, I felt lonely without any companions. Bad still, I
                                 8. Wandering                                                                 9. Worse
had no money, but I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometers.
                    10. so

短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改

短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改